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0 posted 2000-11-21 10:23 AM



He said I give him Candy Cane kisses
with lips soft and sweet
he said I just melt him
with pure sugary heat

Not at all like honey~
he says I'm more a confection
my Candy Cane kisses
are pure perfection

He says I pout so delicious
as his knees hit the floor
my Candy Cane kisses
leave him begging for more

~SEA~


[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-21-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-11-21 10:29 AM


Oh so cute, and with the holidays coming, most appropriate....

yummmm


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2 posted 2000-11-21 10:32 AM


perfect flow! I loved the title and the poem was a definitely a "treat"

*smiles*
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3 posted 2000-11-21 10:53 AM


well ya cant do no better than having him on his knees begging please ...
very cute and festive sea-gator
great rhyme too girlie-girl  
later-peppermint-gator
jm

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4 posted 2000-11-21 10:57 AM


Very cute, indeed.


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5 posted 2000-11-21 11:07 AM


oh..this is sooo sweet...    i love it!  

hugs, dg


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6 posted 2000-11-21 11:09 AM


Yeah I agree with the rest this is just real cute!!
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7 posted 2000-11-21 11:12 AM


Circe, wonderful, I love this and you KNEW I would didn't you.   Anything with sugar yes I know. Really love this one. and I like the idea of him saying pretty please.
Take care
              Mushy
                


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Only a memory of the same
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8 posted 2000-11-21 11:25 AM


Pure sweetness SEA! Love it!  

<*\\\><

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but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


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9 posted 2000-11-21 11:55 AM


Now you said you wouldn't tell anyone that I actually dropped to my knees BEGGING for more!!!!!!!!   Cheeeezzzzzz, how embarrassing!!!   Oh well, it was worth it anyway.  Hugs and "sugary kisses" back to you my sweet friend.
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Sunshine~   I am so ready for the hoildays! thanks  

Tiersdin~ glad you enjoyed this  

Janet~ always nice to have him on his knees thanks  

Dragonpoe~ thanks  

Dg~ I'm so glad you liked this  

Ethome~ cute is good  

Marsha~ thank you sweet friend......

Dovey~ hey you!   thanks sweetie!  

Mark~ I'm sorry, I couldn't resist telling......you look so good when you beg.....makes me want to give that much more   *smooch*  

-SEA

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11 posted 2000-11-21 12:14 PM





Nice thing about your kisses is that they just a keep on hanging on my lips like a curl of passion on the limb of a well watered tree!!!!!!  Come on baby, lay them on me all you want.

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12 posted 2000-11-21 12:21 PM


~Mark~

say pretty please

~SEA~


( Smooch, smooch, smooch )


              

              

              

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13 posted 2000-11-21 12:22 PM


~OOoEee Sea!!! Nice one! *Peace.
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14 posted 2000-11-21 12:24 PM


I want a lil taste puhlease
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15 posted 2000-11-21 12:29 PM




PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!?????????!!!!!!!

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16 posted 2000-11-21 12:32 PM


Walt~ SMOOCH!  

Mark~ COME AND GET IT!!!
              


~SEA~

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17 posted 2000-11-21 12:33 PM


SpitFire~ thanks sweetie, sorry I didn't see you faster.   -SEA
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18 posted 2000-11-21 12:36 PM


Very cute poem.  Enjoyed this much.  

Poeminister

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19 posted 2000-11-22 09:57 PM


Back to the top...missed this one SEA...and it's just adorable and so endearing...smiles and hugs.
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20 posted 2000-11-24 05:37 PM


Yeah I gotta say this is realllllllllllll sweet....

SEA, this gets bumped back up hun, it's just "sooooooooo" cute  

Coco

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PM~ I'm glad you enjoyed this  

Serenity~ thanks for da bump smiles and hugs back to ya!  

Coco~ thank you for a bump too!   glad you liked this.  

-SEA

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22 posted 2002-04-03 02:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a yummy and delicious poem,s weet friend, your gorgeous words are always sugar-coated with smiles and love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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23 posted 2003-01-27 10:07 AM


beautiful write Susan...glad you shared
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