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R.T.'s Wine
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R.T.'s Wine |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sweeter than wine are the kisses of your words tasted each night in the privacy of my heart I savour your thoughts, your rhythms A tantalizing bouquet of flavorful sensations for the palate heady, intoxicating warming my entire being with a glow of satisfaction Today, I reach for yet another sample from the ripened vines of your eloquent heart... -R.T. {Tiersdin} |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so lovely... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is just beautiful  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sweeter than wine are the kisses of your words tasted each night in the privacy of my heart I savour your thoughts, your rhythms ============== this is indeed lovley... poetry in motion ... wonderful writing take care jm There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great writing... I like this very much! |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
Hell yeah, R.T. Your poems have lost nothing of their magic. Rock on. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sunshine, SEA, Janet marie, Suthern, & Mattster, thank you all for your comments! I'm just getting the hang of this system! Please bear with me! *hugs* -Tier |
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Greg_s Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 36Los Angeles, CA |
This is quite beautiful. I especially liked the "ripened vines" image. Delicate and smooth; wonderful poetry. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Tiersdin, I've not had a chance to Welcome you to Passions... So....Welcome and I hope you enjoy it here! This piece is filled with love and joy..Made me smile Intoxicating in it's self. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
in the privacy of my heart I savour your thoughts, your rhythms...etc... beautiful eloquent writing..all of it... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
R.T. it "hangs" so well, it needs a gentle nudge...up Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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