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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2000-11-21 12:53 PM



“Whassup?”
Virginia Salter

“Whassup?
Whassup?”
Oh, how I detest that sound!!
“Whassup?Whassup?”
It makes my head spin round!

I’d rather hear. . .
“Wha’smatter, dear?”
or “Been there done that!”
thousand times a year
than one more. . .
“Whassup?”

This world, this world...
Oh, what’s it coming to?
“D’yer feet fit a limb?”
each time someone says,
“Who?”

“Whassup?”
“Whassup?”
Can’t stand it one more time!
It pains me so,
you gotta know,
and fills my brain with slime.

“Whassup?”
“The ceiling!”
“Whassup?”
“The sky!”
”Whassup?”
“There’s a bird flying by.”

“Hold on to your hat!
Imagine that!
I thought the pigs were in the sty.

© November 9, 2000

© Copyright 2000 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2000-11-21 01:53 PM


Hi VAS..I think I had said you made me smile because I hate hearing the  whassup myself... I said  cute...I believe..haahaa
~smiles~

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
2 posted 2000-11-21 02:02 PM


hey, you be da girl, VAS! wassup wit dat? whoops! 'scuse me. i mean, wassappenin'???? er... you rock, poet! the ceiling! LOL... the sky! hehe    

i dig it!  

OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
3 posted 2000-11-21 02:44 PM


TRUE !!  

Regards,
Olias

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2000-11-21 02:46 PM


I couldn't agree more!!
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
5 posted 2000-11-21 06:15 PM


Thank you all!  This was a really rough day for me and it has helped immensely to come home to all your smiles.  Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Virginia

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