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Goodbye |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Though goodbye verse is my choice sad tears cascade unbidden Tis true that I kept so many of my emotions hidden All love, unfelt, held at bay sealed off for a time Feel the pain of this goodbye read it now within my rhyme |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This took me back to a time that I refused to make close friends as I didn't want to hurt so when I said goodbye again. Such a great loss did I afford myself, for there had been 3 years to have developed relationships that really could have lasted. Well done piece! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Mighty congratulations on the 10000 and for a most excellent poem, PdV... regards to you, Sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Congratulations on the 10,000, but it's not really goodbye from you is it? Please say it isn't so. *HuGS* Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Poetdevine Congratulations on 10000, what an achievement. I am very happy that you chose the title Goodbye on the same day I wrote a poem titled the same. Hope you get to 20000 soon. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Congratulations on your 10,000 post. I only hope someday I make it that far.  Very nicely written. I can completely relate to it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
feel the pain within my rhyme, words do affect others, and good memories can comfort the hurt. huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Goodbye sucks,doesn't it? Corinne |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congratulations on your 10000th post. Wow. You've accomplished so much... just think, each time you've touched the keyboard, you've magnified your smiles, your friendships, acquaintances...10000 times.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Each goodbye makes for a fresh hello. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PDV, I'm saying Felicitations to 10000th post and Bonjour to seeing you write 10000 more  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sharon, Congratulations on your 10,000th post!!!!  I can feel the sadness in your words. Well done. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
It takes a lot for one to seal themselves off....but the friendships and the things the heart will miss....is it worth it? The thing to say goodbye to is the pain.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- Congratulations on 10,000! WOW!! I really like this poem too...sometimes it takes a goodbye to bring out our true feelings...this expresses it well. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Goodbye? Just when I'm coming back better than ever?...Surely you jest?....Why, why, I'm just coming back to try to get into your pants?....What's this? Why, what are you doing tomorrow? Are you wearing underwear? What color? Why, why, I'm just here to please your every whim?.....I love ya ya know? |
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PanDol Senior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 1245USA |
Saying good bye always sucks,....well....most of the time it does.  But if I must say it, you've said an excellent goodbye. And I hope you're not leaving Passions, are you? ~PanDol |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hell no she ain't goin' nowhere...Toerag's back and she's been tryin' to get into bed with me forever......as has LongJohn and Balladeer, but I'm not their type, but Poet is and I'm willing and quite able....so don't let this mislead you...she's just joshing us yanno.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I must agree with WhtDove. . . say good bye to the pain my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mm, goodbyes hurt so much. Take care. Congrats on 10,000. Amazing! Sandra |
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