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Game of Chance |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Entering in this game of chance Thinking not, to find romance Tender words, typed in the night Words that send chills of delight Countless cyber miles of separation Bring many nights of sheer frustration Are these words I write to you Enough to show that I’ll be true? I feel your breath upon my face Only by imagination’s grace I’ve felt your touch from the start Not on my body but in my heart I will, for you, be forever there And hold you cherished in my care |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Oh Sharon me heart goes out to um the person in this poem. Always like your cyber poems. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I can totally identify with these words, very well expressed and written. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- very beautiful  you've expressed these emotions perfectly... enjoyed it much. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
I must tell you that this poem is so completely real for me. It flows so smoothly. This is my first time to this site but I must say I love it. Ok back to this poem... I could feel exactly what was expressed in this poem, as I have yet to meet "My Love" in person. This poem reflects my exact thoughts and feelings towards this man I met online. As I never thought I would ever meet a man online and fall in love, but by some miracle I did. And this poem really hits all my emotions right on the head. WOW! Bravo! Keep up the great work. I will definitely be looking for more poems of yours to read. This one was a real treat. Thank you! Kelly |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Poet deVine... I have put this poem at the top of my list of classic works.....it deserves a place at the very top! It also has a very special meaning to me, and I thank you for writing what I feel in my heart......  P.S. Many congratulations on your 10,000th post, my good friend......that's quite a spectacular accomplishment! Good job!! Follow your dream! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely, sharon- this is a beautiful piece of work which clearly states the heart of a fine poet |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty, Sharon!! Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful deVine. . . Good to see you putting pen to paper again. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all! It seems this is a timely theme lately. I appreciate your comments, as always. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I want to add this to my library, because it does express my own feelings, and obviously those of many others, too. You have said it in a beautiful way. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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