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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Comparisons Would anyone....I will Knowing....Hoping Accepting....Giving White....Wheat Lizard kisses....Shoulder bites English....Flower He....I Us |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Shelby~ Welcome to Passions ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, bless her heart, was first to welcome you... please check your e-mail! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Shelby- Welcome to Passions!  I look forward to seeing lots more from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I love the lizard kisses, shoulder bites, and the way the differences finally unite as "us" at the end of the piece. Welcome to passions, hope to see much more of your work. Thanks for sharing  Regards, Olias |
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sexyILN Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 29 |
Congradulations! This is your first poem on here and you already have 4 more posts than me! (I've done my third) Oh well, welcome anyway. ...peace as a primary goal, is dangerous because it implies that you will sacrifice any principle for the sake of it.... Robert Kaplan |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Marge, Thank you for the welcome. It was very kind of you to greet me to Passions. Sunshine, Also thank you for the welcome and the email, the picture was beautiful. vlraynes, I appreciate your welcome, Thank you OLIAS, Im glad you liked the lizard kisses....shoulder bites, Its very special to me and one other that only he could understand. Thanks for the welcome. SexyILN, Thanks for the reply, with both of us new i have not been able to read your work but will. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Shelby, welcome to Passions. I liked this, it was so different. Look forward to reading more. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Irish Rose, Thank you, I knew it was different and wasnt sure if it would look alright. Im glad you liked it. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions and what a wonderful way to join our little poetic family. Loved the lizard kisses too and especially when the ending became an "US". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome Shelby! I really liked this one. . . wonderful to see the different things come together at the end. . . Excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome Shelby... I liked this little piece...the way the images fuse together... I'm glad you have found your way to Passions! KThe wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Mark, Thank you, Im glad you enjoyed it. Sven, I like to be a little different! Thank you. Severn, Thank you for the welcome everyone is so nice here. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I hope you find yourself a comfy chair and read all the words of the others here. I look forward to reading more from you!  |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Poet deVine, thank you for your your reply, its nice to feel welcome. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Shelby, Welcome to passion's. yanno I have a cat with your name. Write on Kethry  Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Shelby, welcome to Passions, this is a very fine piece. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Kethry, I have always loved the name Olivia, its so old fashion. thanks for reading my poem. Marsha, Thanks, i appreciate you taking the time to look at my work. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is really cool!! I enjoyed it and welcome to passions Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
Saunni, I know its simple and different, but glad you liked it. thanks! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
aaaahh, actually I was talking about the Shelby part. Write on. Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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