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madlion
Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 12
boca raton

0 posted 2000-11-20 07:57 PM


Pointless i ask myself
what is pointless
Falling in love,or maybe its not the falling in love that is pointless
but the falling in love with the wrong person
it seems that it happens to me everytime i fall in love
maybe its me
whats my definition of love
i'm i doing to much loving or i'm i not doing enough loving
is love just a game
is there only one winner
one loser
never two winners.........



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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-11-20 08:29 PM


Welcome to Passions, madlion! Your pain is quite evident in this piece of writing. Yes, sometimes there are winners all around. Sometimes it takes awhile to find the one who is just right for you. So don't give up! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions!

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 11-20-2000).]

Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
2 posted 2000-11-21 01:21 AM


Madilion, welcome to Passions!!!  Hope you find a home here.  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-11-21 02:14 AM


Hi Madlion welcome to Passions...and I think its not in loving...but in loving unwisely...but how do you know til you are already committed that its wrong? You dont know how this touches me...
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