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White Feather |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Do you hear the heartbeat? White feather the poems are calling Do you feel friendship's heat? White feather the poems are calling Do you sense the sadness, White feather the poems are calling An absence of all gladness? White feather the poems are calling Do you feel the pull and tug, White feather the poems are calling Surrounded by the warmest hug? White feather the poems are calling Do you miss the repartee? White feather the poems are calling Do you need the insanity? White feather the poems are calling The poems are calling loud and long Come back soon and bring your song Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kethry~ I liked this a lot......I didn't fully understand it, but I don't think I need to, I enjoyed the flow of it.  -SEA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, it's for Marge, who has temporarily left and as she has the Cherokee use name of White Feather I thought I could build on that. Obviously misguided on my part. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Kethry, a lovely and appealing rhythmic missive...how can your White Feather resist? Rainy |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I totally get it now, and now that I know it, it makes the poem that much better!  Thanks for telling me, I felt kinda stupid for not getting it completely -SEA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rainydays thank you so much.I was aiming for the sound of a heartbeat. SEA, no problem, I'm Australian. I expect to be misunderstood. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh I know WhiteFeather, she will hear you...this is wonderful! What a tribute! Kethry! Well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great tribute......and I think that she will like it a lot... you've done a wonderful job kethry... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful poem and plea for one that means so much to us all. When I saw the title I was drawn as I knew it was for Marge and I have one with the same title back in open 9. I am sure she will return as soon as she is done pouting and she will love to see that she is missed. YEAH, as if she didn't know already. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ I knew something was calling me gently to peek in ... I will return to this lovely piece tonight. And I thank you from the heart of this little Cherokee lady ~ *Hugs* ~*White Feather*~ *Mark~ You make me smile. Love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Kethry White Feather is very happy that you have paid her a fine tribute and you couldn'thave written it for a better poetic Jewell than White Feather...I think you are to be commended for your wonderful thoughts and work!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, this is wonderful, and it's obvious she heard you. Beautiful work, as all yours are love, I love this as I always do, you have such a delightful touch. Take care Slushy Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, thanks for stopping by and spreading your rays of happiness Charisma, thanks but this was more a pleasure than a job Mark, I know ethome, thanks for the kind words Marsha, I was aiming for Mushy. How'd I do? Marge thank you so much for hearing the drums and... and... and for being you. Come back soon. *HuGS* Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kethry- i'm so happy to have found this.. what a wonderful penning for a very special lady... she certainly is missed, and i'm sure, when she is ready, our White Feather will gently float in on a breeze.. wonderfully rhythmic write. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Kethry, this is simply too lovely to express its beauty in mere words... Regards, sudhir... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Vicky, thanks, it does sort of have a rhythm doesn't it. Sudhir, that I have touched you, is an honour indeed. be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, yours is far better than mere 'Mushy' Oh! no this is far superior. I really do love this one love, it's soooooo you. Take care Slushy Mushy  Now what would you do if I started putting down all of my names. (No it's far too confusing  )Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Because I love the little Cherokee so much and you have penned one that deserves to be shared some more. Your heart is a treasure as well Kethry, don't you ever doubt that. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Kethry, I want to thank you for the explanation above that you gave to our friend Sea... I gotta tell ya Gurl, the style of this poem is unique and I enjoyed this read |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mark, Well I think she's pretty special too. The first poem I ever read here was one of Marge's. It touched me in ways I can't even begin to describe. Thanks for the bump. Coco, Thanks for the comment on the explanation if it helped then it's good. Thanks also for the unique comment (did you mean weird)*laughs* I like your style too gurl. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hope this clarifies response earlier... Until I read Not knowing the find I see before me Quality one of a kind Until next poem read Expect but the same from Kethry my poetfriend Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ As we gather together to celebrate the rites of the Thanksgiving holiday - I will think of you and be thankful for your friendship. May the Great Spirit bless and keep you. May you greet the sunshine with a smile. May you know that these moccasined feet walk with you in friendship. I thank you for this lovely gift and will share it with my family. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It spoke to me!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kathleen, I have some wonderful pills that can stop that from happening. Be well Kethry. Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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