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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I saw your name heart clutched envelope trembled fingers shook took long, long look at the stamp and date sent heaven bent saw your name fair game never the same again would I hear the voice in the words see the words give promise promise breathing hard hardly breathing get a grip get a grip don’t slip, don’t slide Oh that Magic Carpet Ride saw your name won’t stay sane never again want to bend toward heaven Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Was the name... "Publisher's Clearinghouse?" Just a thought that I had. Bob <>< |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kari, heartstoppingly amazing. write on Keth Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, I know this feeling, oh don't I just. Wonderful, as you know I would say. I really think this is one of your best I truly do. Utterly divine, I love it. YES I DO Take care love Majestic Marsha   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
sounds like you got some kind of letter, sunshine!! Wish it had been from me  This is excellent at capturing feelings and emotions connected with an event like that. I know how it feels....  |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I love the style of this, I think your on a roll at the moment, excellent work !! Regards Olias. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's always wonderful to see the right name. . . Excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Anymore, I write, and post, only for myself...to see fine and wonderfully gifted poets respond is...a tribute...thank you... Bob, thank you.., Kethry, Marsha, I will give my sister your kind regards, but I will keep your lovely comments for myself!.... Olias..,recently it has become known,...I, as well as everyone here...need to believe in themselves... Sven, you are ulimately, most kind.... 'Deer, indeed, the kindest letter has been..."you are a winner!".... < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-21-2000).] |
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