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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-11-20 10:21 AM


what she does……..

she blinks
looks east
sun to greet
and smiles

faces south
soul beams
warm heart
dances

casts eyes
westerly
horizon sees
charm

she blinks
faces north
cool winds
kiss cheeks

in the turn
in the turn of mind
turn of time
a circle
complete
completely hers
to share
arms spread wide
encompassing all
silent prayers
prayers wing
wing upward

slight bend
hand to mouth
lips to fingertips
soft kiss
pats the earth
spirits dance
soul romance
in spirits dance

a circle again
begins again, and she is then
gone



Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 2000-11-20 10:38 AM


She does it beautifully, Sunshine...


Michael

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2000-11-20 11:36 AM


When I read what you write here, my gypsy soul can't help but laugh and dance for joy!
This is magnificent...a wonderful way to start my morning!! Thank you!!  


Follow your dream!


Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2000-11-20 12:21 PM


What I see is a child arms outstretched spinning freely in her youth and I blow a kiss back to you dear friend.  Bob <><
Sven
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4 posted 2000-11-20 12:30 PM


spinning here. . .

whhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2000-11-20 01:16 PM


Finding the horizon no matter which way she faces leads to the same promise of life as it all ends up in a circle.  Lovely write my friend and so nice to be back reading your works again.  
Marsha
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6 posted 2000-11-20 01:21 PM


Kari, This is the cream of the crop, wonderful, outstanding and excellant. Such a perfect one love, the circle of life, Oh I love this one, absolutely love it. really well done.
Take care
             Majestic Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-11-20 01:51 PM


Michael, she's such a little dreamer...

Sunny1, any time I can give the Gypsy a gift is a GOOD day...

Bob, that's almost right...now see her as a woman who is gracefully turn, and one who knows how to thank...

LOL with you, Sven...thank you...

Mark, the circle of the spirit is telling, indeed...

Marsha, yes...exactly,...thank you...



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




ethome
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8 posted 2000-11-20 02:19 PM


Beautiful magical dance in an never ending circle of inspired spirit...very nice indeed!
Balladeer
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9 posted 2000-11-20 03:46 PM


What a nice picture you paint, sunshine. Yes, love is all and all is love....everywhere you look.

I especially like the part about the soul beaming and warm heart dancing facing south  

There is mothing like loving life and living love. I like this one very much...

OLIAS
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10 posted 2000-11-20 03:53 PM


I like the re-emphasis of words from line to line, they add to the flow of the piece, great subject and perfect style.

Regards
Olias

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11 posted 2000-11-20 06:46 PM


Feel The Music
Of The Dawn
Hear The Light
To You To You Called In Song

Whirl Midst Rainbow
Braziers
Entitities We Call
Sing The Dawn In Dance

Feel All That Surrounds

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2000-11-20 07:35 PM


Karilea~

You know this affords me the vision of your spirit ~
Dancing the dance of circles ~
Ever engaging the earth in her sharing ~
Ever thankful for the gift she is wearing ~
Turning ~ turning
time again turning ~

So very soulful, sweet poet.
~*Marge*~



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13 posted 2000-11-21 02:05 PM


Thank you ethome, for taking time to join the circle...

'Deer, did you catch the wink?...

Thank you Olias...I enjoy your work as well...

Dreamseeker, you provide very interesting responses, thank you...

Marge, I am so glad you found this one...I had hoped you would feel the energy and come join the circle...thank you...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Marsha
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14 posted 2000-11-24 07:20 PM


Kari, back in the circle you go. Around and around


take care
                MM



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

aurora rain
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15 posted 2000-11-24 10:17 PM


i'd lost my inspiration these past few days. but here i am, again, to relinquish in the joys and colours of poetry.

this was great inspiration.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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16 posted 2000-11-24 10:27 PM


So soft and delicate...a beautiful
weave...felt like a soft breeze on a summer
day...utterly perfect~


You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~

Sunshine
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17 posted 2000-11-25 05:25 PM


Marsha, I think I shall lay my future in your capable hands...thank you...

aurora...I can only hope to inspire...it is you who shall aspire...thank you...

Butterflies...you are so welcome...I now look forward to seeing your name every time I turn, and I enjoy the treat...thank you...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Martie
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18 posted 2000-11-25 05:55 PM


The circle, the dance...beautiful!
Sunshine
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19 posted 2001-01-08 03:48 PM


Martie...YOU are the dance!  I know, because I can see it in your dimples...Thanks!
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