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A state(ment) of mind! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Amid dew drops from the winter mist At the gateway of a love-filled morn, A pretty flower uncurls to bloom And a rare beautiful dream is born. I think of her and feel human warmth And the coldness of frost disappears, I think of her and feel special shocks As if being teased by love-dart spears. Can't describe this state of mind at all But love the way this day has started, Can't fight being in this state of love Just hope that this bud stays unthwarted. Reluctantly the warm sun peeks out With a beaming face of approval, Sharing smiles with my beloved's face Reflecting upon dawn's fresh petals. And I simply feel happy today As much as a butterfly in flight, Flapping its wings in joyful colours Finding a blooming flower in sight. Even gladness finds me glad today! ~~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 this one will find many smiles Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I simply feel happy today As much as a butterfly in flight, Flapping its wings in joyful colours Finding a blooming flower in sight. Even gladness finds me glad today! ============== Sud-babes ...when your smiling were all smiling... this is wonderful... such lovely imagery loved the rose petal images its so great to see your name here this morn later-brilliant butterfly-gator jm There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sudhir, this is wonderful, good to see you, and everyone should have to "fight" the feeling of lov, but who wants to?  "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O my friends, how can I thank you enough... between stressful work, this writer continues to write and my most cherished friends continue to read, thanks a bunch for your continued belief in me... Karilea, If I could ever thank you enough, tell me how? Janet, my BRILLIANT poetic friend, thanks so much... for being there as always... Kathleen, it sure is the most difficult thing to do and maybe most improbable almost impossible too... thank you so very much... regards to all, sudhir |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You found me smiling big on this one my friend. Gawd it is so nice to see your name in here again. Have I told you lately that you and your muse have been missed? Wonderful write my friend. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Sudhir I love it when you're in love ..you write the most beautiful positive thinking love poems...great inspiration has filled your heart to overflowing with joy and what the heck's the matter with that.... absolutely nothing!!...I'm really glad that your gladness makes you glad....have a nice day......ethome.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome back my friend. . . you have been missed. . . This is wonderful. . . I can see that your muse is in full force!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sudhir, This was wonderful!! So nice to see you back. Hope you stay a while with us my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Mark, my friend, thank you so much... I am so glad that I could bring out the smiles... O ethome, thanks so very much... yes adn my heart is overflowing, I just wish I can sustain the happy feeling for a lifetime and a bit more... Sir Sven, thanks for the welcome, my friend, and I see that you are busy with building a passion's gallery... carry on your great work, my ever-romantic friend... and we meet often... Lone Wolf, Thanks a lot, and I hope to stay back for a longer time too..... regards to all, sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Sudi, nice to see you again Enjoyed your poem very much Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir, Sudhir beloved, you have helped me open my wings and fly. May you fly up with your poetry.  Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Maree, O friend, thanks so much... Kethry, have I indeed, have I??? I am so much honoured by your response.... Thanks... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Seeing your words has warmed my heart. I love knowing that you know joy. 'Sharing smiles with my beloved's face Reflecting upon dawn's fresh petals.' May you continue to be richly blessed. So very good to see you, my friend. *Heart-Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
...and Marge, my friend, I am honoured to see your name in this thread and feel your support... Thanks a lot, Regards, Sudhir |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Now this brought smiles to my heart this morning....thank you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
And your response brought smiles to me, Paula, thank you so much... regards, sudhir |
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