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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-11-20 01:27 AM


When you asked me if............
I said yes.....

When you asked me when..........
I said now.........

When you asked me why..........
I said because I see a part of me in your heart........

When you asked me what..........
I said I only want what you can give me........

When you asked me how...........
I said because I love you...........

When you asked me....Do I .......
I said I do.....forever.........

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2000-11-20 04:42 AM


I hope it's a long "forever"

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



inot2B
Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-11-20 01:04 PM


Your words are beautiful.
Sometimes all it takes is
love to hold it together
forever.

spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
3 posted 2000-11-20 01:33 PM


So much said, So much implied.
Beautiful
Rich

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