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Denise
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0 posted 2000-11-19 10:58 PM


Just where is Marge, I'd like to know
For I've been searching high and low
Without success to spot her here
Where can she be, oh dear, oh dear!?!

Where did she go, please tell me quick;
I hope she isn't feeling sick;
Perhaps she's gazing at the moon
And will appear here very soon!!

Just where is Marge of lightning pen
Who strikes a hit, then strikes again?
It feels a little strange, I'd say
Not seeing her at all today!

Please hurry back, I miss you so
I never said that you could go!!
What's that you say? You have a life?
Well give it up and end my strife!!!  

Denise


© Copyright 2000 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2000-11-19 11:03 PM


Denise--this is great... I miss her wonderful poetry too...I feel sure she is busy making more...don't worry!
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2000-11-19 11:09 PM


Denise,
Wonderful, a very enjoyable read.

Denise
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3 posted 2000-11-19 11:27 PM


Thanks Martie and Seymour! It does feel strange on the rare occassion that she isn't here, doesn't it? Hurry back, Marge!!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-11-19 11:40 PM


She was online today..but don't see a post by her.

This is cute by the way Denise!  

Temptress
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5 posted 2000-11-19 11:44 PM


Cute poem. I find myself wondering the same thing.  
WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-11-19 11:47 PM


LOL Good lil' ditty Denise!!  HUGz

CONGRATS ON 14,000 POSTS!!! Way to go!!

vlraynes
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7 posted 2000-11-19 11:50 PM


Denise-
   this is great!  
   i'm sure Marge will love it.  
   hope she sticks her head in here
   soon...i'm sure she's close by...
   just lurking about...lol.  
  
   Oh Marge!!  Are you listening? lol
   We miss you in here...

   hugs,
   -vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Janet Marie
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8 posted 2000-11-19 11:55 PM


PSSSSSSSSTT...
I heard a rumor shes hanging out in the Pub...
I'll bet she sitting up on the piano entertaining the crowd  
Margie-gator were gonna send the troops in soon if ya dont post  
very cute Denise .. and its nice to know someones always watching out for us..
no surprise that it would be you  

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9 posted 2000-11-20 02:35 AM


Thanks, Denise~
I'm just doing a project that is keeping me
occupied at the moment.
Spending a LOT of time in the archives and
contacting some members that haven't posted
for a while.

I am hanging around in the Pub, as Janet said.

I'll get to #11 when I'm done *pouting*. LOL !
That's just for my little buddy, Vicky ! !


Thank you, sweet lady.
Seems we have a mutual admiration society !
I see you found your Congrats !
I appreciate you so much.
*Hugs* from my heart to yours.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2000-11-20 08:10 AM


Wonderful Denise! What a perfect flow this poem has ... and I see you've found Marge ... great work, great poem!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Celeste
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11 posted 2000-11-20 08:26 AM


*smiling*   Light and full of personality!   Loved it!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

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12 posted 2000-11-20 09:14 AM


oh too cute....bump!

Karilea
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13 posted 2000-11-20 10:58 AM


Denise, thanks for bringing her out of the archives and showing us she is always thinking of Passions!!!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



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14 posted 2000-11-20 11:09 AM


put a smile on my face...thanx for the read
wayoutwalt
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15 posted 2000-11-20 11:24 AM


this is so perfectly written. oh don't leave us Denise!! wait did I miss the point yuh that's me missin the point when it was so perfectly sweetly awesomely written. Hahahah I love beating around the bush in a reply.
Go Marge!!

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16 posted 2000-11-20 12:40 PM


This reminds me of that old song, "Who is Sylvia?"

I like it.



passion is life. . . ~Diana

Mark Bohannan
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17 posted 2000-11-20 12:46 PM


OKAY Marge, can a cowboy coax you out with the promise of a sunset ride and a sunrise romp on the range?  

================

This is such a wonderful thing you have done here Denise to try to round up our lovey Cherokee princess.  Loved the poem and the tender thoughts behind it.  She does seem to get lost at times in her dedication doesn't she?  Must be that wonderful heart of hers and that endless glowing of pure love.

Denise
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18 posted 2000-11-20 08:57 PM


Thanks, everyone! Whew! I'm glad we finally found her!

Denise

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19 posted 2000-11-20 09:08 PM


Great excuse, Marge!! We don't want them to know where you REALLY are....by the way, pick up some coffee on the way, ok? We're running low
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