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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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you apparel your tears < !signature-->like wings on torn cardboard hearts many times I’ve been hurt deeply of the things you oft had impart to my knees I bent when first I heard your sweet laments who was it that introduced us do I know them or was there some thing meant Sorry, thought I missed something Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-19-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lucky--I'm so glad to see you...and I don't think you miss much...hugs! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I love the imagery of those injured, ragged hearts raising frail wings of tears like a mangled bird trying to fly. I wonder, could the strength of those wings heal, to lift those hearts to comfort? And, meetings ARE something meant (I believe) - and no, you certainly don't miss a thing... ~ ~ ~ ~ The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Sweet, Sweet Poet~ How devine to see your loving post. You are like a breath of fresh breeze blowing through the poetic portals. Ahhhhhhhhhhh ! I breathe you in. *Hugs*, my friend. *Hi, sweet Rosemary.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Martie, don't know what happened You said something about #11, we looked and it just wasn't there. Passion's a real transition. Thank you Martie nice to see you too. Rosemary, Where did you go..? First your here then yer gone... WOW your back again. Do you know what happened..? Marge, I think i'm going to take a nap and try and figure out computers later. All my best to you. dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you apparel your tears love that line, Dale ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You must have run into to some fake tears somewhere along the line Lucky and so the write or maybe you were listening to the sentiments of your local politician...good writing otherwise, nice way to put it... ethome... |
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