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angel girl
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...

0 posted 2000-11-19 12:53 PM


SHE CRIES

Forced to be something she is not,
She cries when she's sad,
Afraid to be caught.

Can't let them see the tears within,
For once they start
They will not end.

As she waits she slowly dies.
Her tears are supressed,
But inside she cries.

© Copyright 2000 Liz - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-11-19 12:59 PM


That could just about eat someone up inside if they can't get the release they need ... well done!! a lot said in a few lines..
take care......ethome

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
2 posted 2000-11-19 01:35 PM


The reflection that I see in here brings
back so many emotions...It's clear the
emotion and the pain that you used to write
this with...Excellent writing and may poetry
bring you healing if this poem is written
for your own unshed tears~


You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-11-19 02:06 PM


Go ahead a cry...cry all the tears you like...cry all the tears you must...release the hurt and the pain...feel the pain and feel the release...I do and it works...believe me...James
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