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Celeste
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0 posted 2000-11-19 07:56 AM


Within a heart waits
Anticipation dances
Freedom draws a breath to fly


To capture and live a moment is truly living

© Copyright 2000 Celeste - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-19 07:58 AM


this is lovely!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Alan
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2 posted 2000-11-19 08:41 AM


Beautiful. Says a lot with few words.
Enjoyed it

ethome
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3 posted 2000-11-19 08:41 AM


Very well done!!
Moon Dust
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4 posted 2000-11-19 09:10 AM


Love what you've done here

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


Sven
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5 posted 2000-11-19 02:37 PM


Wonderful dreamkeeper. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Beki
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6 posted 2000-11-19 02:40 PM


very nicely done....great first attempt  
kaile
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7 posted 2000-11-19 06:43 PM


*a pat on the shoulder for a job well done*

now when can we see your second one?*grinz*

DreamSeeker
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8 posted 2000-11-19 06:49 PM


First Time I Long For
Tender Touches Life
Begins As Loves Eyes Open Wide


And The Days
That They Linger
They Are Nothing
To You At All
Yet You Remain

And The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Give

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