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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Can You Make Yourself A Song Floating Above The City You Your Melody Floating Phraseology Dipping Diving Soaring Through Nights Eyes Skies Can You Make Yourself A Dream Where Impossibilities Merge To Define Each Forming Faces On Places Concepts Carved In Concrete Can You Make Yourself Pure Aspiration A Book A letter A Sneeze Comet Magnet Cloud Stream A Fear A Passion A Believer AllUnseen Propelled By Belief Can You Make Yourself... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dreamseeker, Welcome to passions, Can you dream dreams and write poetry? You certainly can! Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Boy you went right up through Van Allen's Belt and back to earth again ...great ideas.. I like how you end it with the most important question of all.."can you make yourself..." Enjoyed this very much....ethome |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very nice...wonderful challenges presented here...and I love the way you ended it  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dreamseeker... welcome... this is a lovely first entry...I hope you can discover some of your dreams here - in this place of dreaming.. KPlease check your email for a special welcome... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
DreamSeeker, if you are going to lend your imagination to us, then we will be able to answer and be all of your queries... thank you! Welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Can You Make Yourself Real Awaken Soul Within The Petals Slowly Open Life Flows Free I loved it. Thrilled to see you here! Will look forward to reading more from you.... To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Eowyn New Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 7Malaysia |
It's wonderful... especially the ending I love it!! =) Eowyn |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
dreamseeker- welcome to passions! it is so lovely to see all these new faces being added to our family. this is excellent...loved the format and word choice in this one. especially loved the last verse! take care. ~amy~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Great entrance! Welcome to Passions and I'm looking forward to many posts from you in the future...your work shows the heart and soul of a natural weave You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dreamseaker, welcome, this is a beautiful entrance, I think you have found your natural home. Wonderful work. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi, a belated welcome and a comment that your style of poetry is certainly most unique and original...will try to read more  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Can You Make Yourself A Dream Where Impossibilities Merge To Define Each Forming Faces On Places Concepts Carved In Concrete enjoyed your words...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful dreams....and one day dreams will be true. wonderful entrance. Charisma |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I found this gem lingering here..just wanted to tell you how much I liked your poem.  |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Boy, is this great. So few words and they say so much. Will look for more. Welcome, ME |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A belated welcome from me too! This is just a fabulous piece. The words, the thoughts, the format, I love it! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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