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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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0 posted 2000-11-18 10:08 PM


Me - My Life

My life today is filled
With much happiness and love
I do not want any particular thing
But yet yearn for something more

I know not what

Perhaps it is a new beginning
Or an old ending
Or something I do not know how to put
Into words

Still I know it is something that I yearn...


Roniece Dawson-Bruce



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inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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1 posted 2000-11-18 10:26 PM


I don't know you, but you must know me. You have just written how I feel. I just know there has to be more, but what I don't know.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2000-11-18 10:30 PM


Inot2B:  Thank you for your comment - I wrote this in 1989, but still today, I am still yearning for something more...I wish you sunshine and smiles for your day.

Roniece  

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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3 posted 2000-11-19 05:59 AM


Roniece,
May all your yearnings be met and  all your dreams fulfiled.
Great poem
write on
Kethry.


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

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4 posted 2000-11-19 02:40 PM


That's half the battle my friend. . .

Wonderful. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2000-11-19 02:50 PM


You know I relate to this one Roniece. It will come my friend, just follow the sunshine.   Take care!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2000-11-19 03:30 PM


Roniece,

May you find that in which you seek.  It is human nature to always seek for something more.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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