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kat
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0 posted 2000-11-18 09:57 PM


I Dream

I dream of solid grounds
Caressed in clouds
Of silken feathered pillows

I dream of filtered light
Drenched in sunlight
Never ending rainbows

I dream of scented flowers
Petal showers
Meadow covered forests

I dream of singing hearts
Endless starts
Two souls wrapped in a chorus

I dream of trapped wild fires
Released desires
Forever you and me

I dream of breathless kisses
Fulfilled wishes
I dream of fantasy

I dream my love I dream


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Dakota
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since 2000-05-25
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1 posted 2000-11-18 11:00 PM


I dream of Hearts free'd
Full of lust's Greed
Free to relish in the moment

I dream of shared Love
Like a gift from above
Without all this torment

I dream of long walks
And in depth talks
And all that may ensue

I dream of Passions Fire
And deepest desire
Yes My Love, I Dream of YOU!


Kat~ Excellent as usual!!  

Dakota  

[This message has been edited by Dakota (edited 11-18-2000).]

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-11-19 12:30 PM


Lovely!!!! This is so beautiful. Like lyrics to a love song.  
Alan
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right next door
3 posted 2000-11-19 12:32 PM


Wonderful work. It is nice to have sweet dreams...
CocoBaci
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4 posted 2000-11-19 12:45 PM


Kat, this is a splendid write and I so much enjoyed the read thank you for sharing
Coco

inot2B
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5 posted 2000-11-19 01:09 AM


Hopefully when you wake you find your dreams come true. Really do enjoy happy dreams.
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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6 posted 2000-11-20 05:06 AM


Kat,
DREAM ON!
Keth


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

LilPeanut
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 26
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7 posted 2000-11-21 10:06 AM


WOW! Nothing better than to write about thean your dreams   I thought this poem was simply beautiful. I must say, the title is what made me want more. For I am a dreamer myself. Very nice poem...loved it. I especially enjoyed
"I dream of solid grounds
Caressed in clouds
Of silken feathered pillows"

What a beautiful start to an extremely wonderful poem. Have a wonderful day

Kelly

insect
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since 2000-04-22
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8 posted 2000-11-25 01:59 AM


Love this one Purr Purr
I think I'll dream of you tonight!
Zzzzzzzzzzzz

kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

9 posted 2000-11-29 03:09 PM


I dream of boundaries broken
Love felt when unspoken
Your breath to breathe as mine

I dream of hearts dancing
Souls romancing
My forever valentine


Dakota:  Thank-you so much for your beautiful poem to me. Love is a gift from up above and I hope that one day that dreams such as this do come true. May YOUR dreams come true Dakota. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!  



Poet deVine:  Thank-you so much! Coming from you, I take it as a great compliment.  


Alan:  Yes it is nice to have sweet dreams. Thanks!


Coco:  Thanks for the compliment and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!


inot2B:  Hopefully everyone's dreams can come true. Thanks!


Keth:  I'm a dreamer keth. I dream! I dream!! LOL

Kelly:  I'm glad this poem drew you in and I'm even happier that you liked it so much. May your dreams come true. Thanks!  


insect:  I'm glad you loved it!
You think you'll dream of me tonight? Hmmmm.. It's been a while since I've responded so I guess you must have had your dream already.  Hope it was a good dream or are you still sleeping and it hasn't finished yet? If it hasn't, sleep well and sweet dreams. LOL   Zzzzzzz



kat

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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10 posted 2000-11-29 03:12 PM


Wow! A lovely work, indeed. excellent flow & imagery.

a great read!

-Tier

Irish Rose
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11 posted 2000-11-29 04:16 PM


There's nothing more special than being able to dream and release those dreams through poetry is there?

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



CocoBaci
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12 posted 2000-12-28 08:56 PM



Kat, I came back to read this one more time and to now thread into my library...

Thank you once again for the enjoyable read...

Coco

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
13 posted 2000-12-28 09:09 PM


I loved the feel of this poem. very good writing.
love and light,
Richard

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