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Message In A Bottle |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
We float at times delicately above what does seem real. As soft as finest eider-down in contrast to hard steel . With words we buffer life's assaults diminishing their force. The pen who's path is wandering may yet find it's true course. To see that which when once revealed shall keep us all aloft , on winds imagination brings that blow so ever soft , across the page that once was blank and called out to be filled . For there if for one moment brief , anxiety is stilled . Thank you my friends for this one gift that takes me from the fray . For if I were to perish now , I've more than words can say . |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah. This touched me deeply. It's a beautiful way to give tribute to the writing of others. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very nicely done doc. moose.. as always yuh |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The gift of these words touch my heart deeply...I would have never found the peace that is within me now if not for the voice of others in their poetry...A beautiful message Dr. you have woven words to line the heart~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Doc, scented with ambrosia, beautiful. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Real fine description of the escape we all need Doc I really enjoyed what you were saying here....take care...ethome |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I think this is the 2nd poem of yours that I've read - (am rather new). Have really enjoyed your insight and thoughts....they flow beautifully. Thank you for sharing. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a poem filled with kindness. I enjoyed it very, very much. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Dr. Moose, very lovely! It also explains my increasing anxiety...my pages are determined to remain blank....arrggghhhh Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful, Doc!!!  |
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