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ethome
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0 posted 2000-11-18 07:44 PM



In the cool of the eve a light Autumn breeze
roamed through a crowd in the park.
And the overhead lights shone down through the night
warmly replacing the dark.
And some folk singer moaned bout his soul and his home
and the miseries of the heart.
While an old man from the past went round and asked
for a cup and some common regard.

Oh how the grey sage could look through his age
with a smile spread cross his face.
And his movements were slow and his words he spoke low
with the art of amourous grace.
"I need a loan sir I can't go any farther
I'm down and broke in this place,
but there's a story I tell and if you listen well
you'll know why I live this disgrace."

Well I just had to listen cause something was missing
and I knew this wasn't a lie.
I put my hand on his shoulder and passed him a folder
and asked him to empty his mind.
He said, "can you wait a minute before I begin it
I have to draw from the memory vine."
He slowly reached in to his coat worn thin
and pulled out his bottle of time.

With a tear in his eye he began
"I once had great friends and planes to fly in
I once had a Rolls Royce pride.
And I was the best that ever was blessed
with a talent to sing songs and write.
Now that it's over I've never been sober
since I lost the one love of my life.
Now that she's gone I keep ramblin on
chasing this pain in my mind.

"My name is Bob Dallas just a plain southern fella
I hail from the state of sunshine.
As a boy I got thinkin about writin and singin
to people who needed to cry.
Cause this thing called a heart could tear souls apart
no matter rich man or wise.
So somehwere within like whiskey or gin
I loosened the ropes on the mind."

I wrote about the stars and the blues in the heart
and hurt that no one explains.
And many discovered that losers were'nt lovers
they just lived in a world full of pain.
And to search for the truth was a hard thing to do
and the news might make one insane.
But there's always a beginning after each finish
and a chance to start over again"

"Well some fellas up north had heard a report
of my singing and soothing ways.
When they came to see me I thought I was dreaming
there was albums they wanted to make.
And before I knew it I was on TV to prove it
singin songs that I wrote yesterday.
It happened so fast more than I could ask
and I played on the golden star stage."

"I made many recordings and reaped the rewardings
of a musical stack of joy.
And with that came the fame and a great name
for the heart warming skills I employed.
Then I met a lady who made me unsteady
with eyes that emptied my soul.
When her lips clung to mine I spun out of time
and my heart beat like a drum roll."

"Did you ever love a woman till almost inhuman
was the love you had to give?
And she'd always be there to give you the care
that gave you the reason to live.
With a smile so warm and voice full of charm
a sweet hosting precious wife.
And a mind so fair under long golden hair
the total essence of life."

"With child she became and the slight of her frame
filled up with a miracle thrill.
Her days did abound with plans all around
I can hear her laughter still.
Six months came along and she was put hard strong
for the love of her dear mother.
So pure was her way and full with no shame
I could hardly deny her the bother."

"Careful plans had been made that I would convey
her to the flight of her mother.
But early that day my work poached me away
and I drank to one song or another.
When it came time to leave I was plagued with unease
I'd become sorely unwound.
While sluggish I thought I'd not want to get caught
out on the freeway unsound."

"So my condition I'd defend and called a dear friend
to escort my love for the part.
And I'd stay behind with low presence of mind
to get back to a sensible sort.
It was a bright summer day I watched them drive way
and thought it the best to retire.
While I drifted away way out of the day
a foul second took their entire."

"My love full of child the friend I beguiled
all gone to the fate of bad luck.
I was called on the phone from a grisly time zone
so caught and horror struck!
My selfish inclines toward the secrets of wine
cost me the change of the gaurd.
Now I was distraught my guts full of knots
by seconds they could have been spared."

"At such a great cost and with eveything lost
to this bottle I've turned for the pain.
And from the depths of this hell I never could tell
if I was completely to blame.
Each time I tried sober my heart would take over
so I'd flush the terror away.
But time does move on and mine's almost gone
as I stand here to show it today."

"So let me tell you son there is good to be done
look after the things that are real.
Because if they're precious you'll never regret it
hold on to the love you can feel.
Don't preoccupy with the chores of your life
and skip past the ones that you love.
If you recognize the wealth of that prize
you've captured a gift from above."

He turned with a reel and shuffled his heels
into the crowd and the night.
And the cool of the eve with a light Autumn breeze
whispered his story and plight.
And the dawn of the morn uncovered his form
in a silent gazebo grave.
While some might scorn the reason he was born
his genius will alawys be played.

© Copyright 2000 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2000-11-18 07:55 PM


ethome,

Excellent!!  What a spellbinding tale of love and loss you have penned.  Very well written my friend.  I just couldn't stop reading!!  

Congratulations on your 2000th post!!!  Here is to many more!!  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Tony Abbot
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2 posted 2000-11-18 08:00 PM


This was wonderful....brilliant storytelling.You know how to spin a yarn.These would make great song lyrics.

'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

Marsha
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3 posted 2000-11-18 08:28 PM


Ethome, now it's morning,   This is Utterly divinely incandescent. A very worthy 2000. (Didn't I say I've had the brats working their socks off   )It is as wonderous as Aladdins cave, as stunning as the Victoria Falls, as spellbinding as Merlins' magic and delightful as the Arabian Nights.
I really love this one. A really superb piece.
Take care
                  Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 2000-11-18 08:43 PM


Ethome* This is exquisite work from one of
the masters of weave...I've enjoyed your
work for a very long time now and each piece
show your growth as a poet...it's a pleasure
to watch you dig deeper and explore new
avenues...An excellent piece to mark your
Milestone and shine as your 2000th post.  
Your replies and your poems are always
enjoyed and I find myself looking forward to
each one...superb work my friend...this said
sincerely from the bottom of my heart~


Poeminister
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5 posted 2000-11-18 08:44 PM


"So let me tell you son there is good to be done
look after the things that are real.
Because if they're precious you'll never regret it
hold on to the love you can feel.
Don't preoccupy with the chores of your life
and skip past the ones that you love.
If you recognize the wealth of that prize
you've captured a gift from above."

Such wonderful and unique tale you've told here. Very intellegently crafted and flows smoothly all the way through keeping the reader absorbed. Liked "memory vine" and "bottle of time".  This is definitly one of my favorites of yours.  Nicely done, and congragulations on your 2000th!

take care,
Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2000-11-18 08:46 PM


my oh my do I love when ya sing the blues E-babes...
this is an AWESOME weave....
so many lessons of life...so many truths
Congrats on your 2000th ET ...
and you have done your self proud on this landmark post...
this is excellent...
and I would like to thank you for the many replies to my work that make up some of your 2000...you have given me so much support, encouragement, and friendship since you joined her...
and you know how much it means to me...
way cool are you
love and respect
jm

=============

These Are The Days
Van Morrison

These are the days of the endless summer
These are the days, the time is now
There is no past, there's only future
There's only here, there's only now
Oh your smiling face, your gracious presence
The fires of spring are kindling bright
Oh the radiant heart and the song of glory
Crying freedom in the night

These are the days by the sparkling river
His timely grace and our treasured find
This is the love of the one magician
Turned the water into wine

These are days of the endless dancing and the
Long walks on the summer night
These are the days of the true romancing
When I'm holding you oh, so tight

These are the days by the sparkling river
His timely grace and our treasured find
This is the love of the one great magician
Turned water into wine

These are the days now that we must savour
And we must enjoy as we can
These are the days that will last forever
You've got to hold them in your heart.



ethome
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7 posted 2000-11-18 09:09 PM


Thanks Lone Wolf for the word spellbinding I'm glad you saw it that way...ethome

Tony I have been spinning them since I was 10 yrs old so I guess nothing's changed...thanks for taking the time to read..ethome

Marsha why do you keep giving me new ones to steal...thanks so much Marsha for your heartwarming replies...and all those references to...I really appreciate it!!

Thanks Butterflies for such kind words as master of weave I really appreciate the fact that you take time to read and enjoy... thanks again...ethome

Poeminister thank you for your thoughts and for picking out that verse it's one of my favs too thanks again!!

Janet you know that I always look forward to replying to your posts. I want to thank you for your continued friendship and your understanding of the musical way I think things out I really appreciate your inspiration...love ya poet pal ethome

Martie
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8 posted 2000-11-18 09:22 PM


Ethome--this is an amazing story, although it is a story that goes on many places, you have told it with such compassion and expressed it with such wisdom...and then in  perfect rhythm and rhyme...I am just in awe...

congratulations dear poet on 2000 and I also thank you for your replies to my poetry...they always make me feel that you have really understood and consider what you say...thank you!

ThyWizard
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9 posted 2000-11-18 09:33 PM


Many wisdoms in words indeed...excellent piece.  I enjoyed reading this, it was an eye opener to me towards the many sides of life...congrats on hitting the 2000 milestone

" If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown


Tryps


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2000-11-18 09:45 PM


Ethome:  This is a wonderful read - I was enthralled right to the end - a beautiful piece.  Congratulations on your 2000th post  - a poet indeed!  Roniece  
Daniel J D
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11 posted 2000-11-18 09:56 PM


Ethome,
Superb, you are a legend. Congratulations on your 2000th, a job well done. There are many stories as real as that out in the middle of the night.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

inot2B
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12 posted 2000-11-18 10:09 PM


Wow, you have a way with words. What a tale you weave.
The bottle may bring you pleasure but in the end nightmares.

Lighthousebob
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13 posted 2000-11-18 10:09 PM


A Great 2 0 0 0 th post!!



So much wisdom shared here for whoever will read and listen with their soul.  I guess that is how it can be in life... the most sorrowful tales can be the greatest lessons learned.  Sadly, what a hard addiction this man faced in his life.  Thank you for sharing and again congratulations on your 2000th.  Bob <><

Sven
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14 posted 2000-11-18 10:16 PM


Superb my friend. . . I have always loved the way that you tell a story. . . and this is no exception. . .

Wonderful. . . and congratulations on your 2,000th!!!  

----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Weave_Watcher
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15 posted 2000-11-18 10:20 PM


Congrats on two thousand posts.  I really liked this piece and have been reading your work for quite a while but I only just started replying. Great weave.  
Kethry
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16 posted 2000-11-18 11:42 PM


ethome,

CONGRATULATIONS 2000 Wow!

You're nearly as old as me *laughs*.
Now us oldies have to stick together I'll bring the food if you bring the wine. We'll get together and have a good time.


Excellent tapestry, I loved the way you wove the dark and light pleasure and pain together. Brilliant.
write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Victoria
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17 posted 2000-11-19 12:14 PM


Congratulations ethome..a wonderful post to
celebrate  your special #2000..

             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


ethome
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18 posted 2000-11-19 05:49 AM


Martie thank you for the kind words and yes this does go on out there but I thought it would be interesting to create a piece about it...ethome

Thanks wizard for the nice thoughts and glad you enjoyed the trip out there..take care

Roniece thank you for taking the time to read and enjoy I appreciate your comments..ethome

Daniel thanks so much for the legend comment I know I'm old enough to be one..thanks again!!

inot2B I'm glad you liked the weave it was a lot of fun creating it....thanks so much..ethome

Bob thanks for reading and for the wisdom comment I appreciate your comments so much!

Sven thanks for your comment on story telling I think you tell a darn good one yourself.. take care..ethome

Thanks weave...glad you're starting to post you'll enjoy doing that...write on!!

Kethry you got a date we'll have a picnic!! thanks for your kind words and the tapestry comment...ethome..what kind of wine??

Victoria thanks for dropping in and for your thoughts...much appreciated..ethome...

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19 posted 2000-11-19 07:46 AM


Ethome, what an amazing post, saying "congratulations on your 2000th" hardly seems appropriate from the life lesson played out so well here on center stage!

I am so very grateful to have come to know you, for I would not like to think that I had missed out on someone who could write like this...

thank you...

(and I'm putting this in my library, too...)


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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20 posted 2000-11-19 09:13 AM


ethome ~ What a wonderfully woven tale, a truly incredible read from beginning to end.  Wow, just wow!!!!!!  And ~~~ Congratulations on 2,000!  Bonnie
ethome
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21 posted 2000-11-19 11:40 AM


Thank you Sunshine for your kind words and for sending this to your library. ......it's great to hear from you...ethome
Aimster
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22 posted 2000-11-19 11:41 AM


E-
this was just so awesome! i found myself
enraptured in the middle of this story
continuing to read faster so that i could
find out what happened. i bow to the king
of weave   congratulations on 2000! take
care.
~amy~

serenity blaze
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23 posted 2000-11-19 12:24 PM


Hi sweetie!!! This is a wonderful tale you've penned here--congratulations on your 2000 post...I've enjoyed your work so much, and look forward to many many more.

Really a great job!!!

ethome
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24 posted 2000-11-19 12:41 PM


Thanks Bonnie I'm sorry I missed you I keep reloading this page...what nice comments you left with me thank you very much....ethome
artsygrl
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25 posted 2000-11-19 12:56 PM


enthome, thanks for the welcome to the board...I really enjoyed the tale you woove here....
Tiersdin
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26 posted 2000-11-19 01:12 PM


Outstanding story telling in rhyme, and congrats on your 2000th poem posted!

excellent!
-Tier

ethome
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27 posted 2000-11-19 02:21 PM


Thanks Amy for getting involved while you read..I appreciate your comments very much...ethome.



juliet_2u
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28 posted 2000-11-19 02:53 PM


Ethome, I'm just in awe. This is simply a masterpiece. Big congrats on your 2000th!!! What a way to celebrate it.
Juls

Marsha
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29 posted 2000-11-19 03:23 PM


Hi you, This is still as marvellous enthralling and wonderful as when I read it the first time. (Which happened to be 1 am, when I was winding down before I took to my bed to sleep the morning away.) Oh what an exciting life I lead, (puts hand to forehead in dramatic gesture.) Anyway the point is it is an excellantly written story in poem form. Utterly brilliant. And a wonderful example of your outstanding work.
A fine one to celebrate your 2000.  
Take care
             Mushy
                            


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

ethome
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30 posted 2000-11-19 05:00 PM


Thanks for the sweetie word Serenity (or is it Celeste) and for the great encouraging comments...ethome

Thanks Artsygrl for taking the time to read and I hope you enjoy the many forums of Passions.

Tiersdin thanks for reading this ballad and I hope to read some morew of your works soon.


ethome
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31 posted 2000-11-19 07:33 PM


Thank you Juliet for the masterpiece compliment ...I don't know about that but I sure like to hear it anyway...thanks again for your thoughts......ethome

Thanks Marsha I really appreciate your upbuilding comments...have a nice day...ethome....

Paula Finn
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32 posted 2000-11-20 12:36 PM


You know what I think of your writing...but this is just awesome...a tale gently musically told...I  can hear the sax in the backround...sweet sad song...congrats on the 2000th and heres to 2000 more...
ethome
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33 posted 2000-11-20 01:27 PM


Thanks Paula for the comments they are delightful and thanks for dropping in....... ethome
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34 posted 2000-11-20 03:38 PM


ethome........this is a brilliant piece.....I truly love the whole story.....superb..

and ****CONGRATULATIONS*** with your 2000....
looking forward to see more from you.

((hugs))
Charisma

ethome
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35 posted 2000-11-20 05:24 PM


Thank you so much Charisma for such wonderful comments I truly do appreciate it!   ethome
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36 posted 2000-11-20 05:24 PM


Ethome my friend...it seems as if it were only yesterday that we were celebrating another milestone together and it is such a pleasure to be doing so again.  What a wonderful tale of love you have woven and I must say that I was entranced enough to read it 3 times.  You my friend are one of the masters here at Passions and I commend you and applaud you on a wonderful marking for your 2000th milestone post.  Oh, and yes, I have gone acoustic but the reverb of the electric still hold that special trance over me, don't let there be any doubt about that my friend.  Congrats again and looking to sharing many more episodes and history making moments with you.
Elizabeth Santos
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37 posted 2000-11-20 07:38 PM


You have treated us with a captivating tale put to wonderful verse and expression. I loved so many of the lines in this poem. Your talents as a poet and a story teller shine through on your 2000th post. Congratulations on this wonderful poem and on your big 2000th.
I loved this one
Liz

Denise
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38 posted 2000-11-20 09:35 PM


Congratulations, Ethome, on 2000! Fabulous writing!!

Denise

ethome
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39 posted 2000-11-21 09:09 AM


Mark thank you so much...I don't think I've ever been more proud of anyone than I am of you....all the things you've accomplished and now you're writing beautiful open hearted poetry...it just thrills the old heart here to see you enjoy yourself so much and thanks for the kind words I really appreciate them so much.....take care   ethome

Eliazbeth those are wonderful upbuilding words you have left with me and they make my day...you know how much I love your poetry and I look forward to reading it always...ethome

ethome
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40 posted 2000-11-21 09:11 AM


Sorry Denise I wasn't watching...thanks for the wonderful uplifting comment...ethome
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41 posted 2000-11-21 10:02 AM


ethome,
my friend...

here I am completely in awe, mystified, hypnotized, spellbound by this amazing poetry...

and then I realise that this is a 2 th post from you and then realise how many of them have been replies to my little attempts at writing... It has been my pleasure to know you as a fellow writer...

I bow to you, my friend...

Take care and here's to many many more

regards,
sudhir

ethome
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42 posted 2000-11-21 12:15 PM


Thank you so much Sudhir those are wonderful adjectives you are pouring on me ..I hope I'm as deserving as they sound....love to read your always excellent work and it's been a pleasure exchanging thoughts here at Passions with a gentleman such as yourself.....have a nice day....ethome
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43 posted 2000-11-21 01:33 PM


What a wonderful tale... well told! *S*
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44 posted 2000-11-21 01:53 PM


FELICITATIONS on 2,000th

Thank you for the pleasant readings that you provide each passing night...

Looking 4ward to many many more...
Coco


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-21-2000).]

JamesMichael
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45 posted 2000-11-21 02:58 PM


Very interesting reading...congratulations on number 2000...James
Seymour Tabin
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46 posted 2000-11-21 03:17 PM


Ethome,
Now I know why I enjoy your comments so much.
Great write I fully enjoyed.

ethome
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47 posted 2000-11-21 04:17 PM


Thank you so much Suthern for taking the time to read the tale...ethome

Hey Coco you're always so kind with your remarks thanks so much I appreciate it much more than you know....ethome

Thanks James glad you could drop in for the read...ethome

ethome
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48 posted 2000-11-22 05:25 AM


Thank you Seymour for the vote of confidence it's much appreciated...ethome
Paula Finn
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49 posted 2000-11-22 11:36 AM


I just had to come back and listen one more time...I love this one so much...come play for me sweet friend
ethome
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50 posted 2000-11-23 12:40 PM


Thank you Paula I'm glad you look at it like a song...it has some musical qualities alright........ethome
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51 posted 2000-12-04 01:12 PM


simply awesome...i read this twice and i still feel like i havent captured the full sentiments of this piece....so eloquently written...

saving this in my library also


ethome
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52 posted 2000-12-04 02:51 PM


Thank you so much Kaile for the nice thoughts  I'm so glad you enjoyed the read!! ....ethome.
Sunshine
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53 posted 2001-01-01 11:04 AM


A re-read befitting the beginning of the New Year!

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54 posted 2001-01-01 11:05 AM


wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen



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55 posted 2001-01-02 09:58 AM


Hi Ethome,

Wonderful reading here, very much enjoyed it and am going to share it with my girls thank you so much.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



ethome
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56 posted 2001-01-02 04:47 PM


Thanks Sunshine for the reread I appreciate your kind thoughts!

Kathleen thank you for taking the time to drop in and read this...ethome

Thanks Cerenity for reading and I hope the girls enjoy it...ethome

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