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Holding That White Dove!
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Holding That White Dove! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Holding That White Dove! ~~Daniel J D~~ The tears in my eyes Are pain from my heart Torn and shredded Contemplating life apart My arms have gone out Offering support But the pleas seem lost How can love so pure And seemingly forever Be shattered, in tatter Begging for a cure Kneeling in agony Eyes closed, ears deaf You left only a paper leaf Saying it was over All that is left is a memory Perhaps trying hard is not the answer For when a mistake is seen as an error Forgiveness to you did not exist Even though our life was an endless list Of happiness, and understanding The choice you took was opting out Nevertheless, my love I will hold in my hand that white dove Look after it, caress it, until you return Then I shall release it in turn And in the name of peace and love Hold you in my arms again, my love Drying your tears, while comforting you In the home, I maintained for you Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You left only a paper leaf Saying it was over All that is left is a memory sighing... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Daniel J D, this is an amazing poem, written with deep love, and the forgiveness in this is awesome. Such brilliant writing, wonderful way you have with words. Love it, I truly do. Keep up the good work Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Look at that what is the chance of that happening, you replying to mine while I reply to yours. This really is excellant writing. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful loving thoughts Daniel..love the undying loyalty aspect of this work... very well written good smooth delivery!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Daniel what a tender and heartfelt piece...I hope everything turns out o'k ~HUG~ Tracie~  < !signature-->Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
nakdthoughts, Thank you so much for the reply. Times can get tough often. Great to know so many care. Marsha, Much appreciated thoughts from a very special friend here at Passions. Ethome, Always great to hear from someone like you, it makes the spirit strong. Tracie, You have done it again, brilliant, Thank you so very much. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*running for tissues* |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Passingshadows, Enduring such hardships can make or break a person. The need to persevere is of utmost importance. Never giving up, that is the key. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
How can love so pure And seemingly forever Be shattered, in tatter Begging for a cure Kneeling in agony Eyes closed, ears deaf You left only a paper leaf Saying it was over All that is left is a memory Perhaps trying hard is not the answer For when a mistake is seen as an error Forgiveness to you did not exist Even though our life was an endless list Of happiness, and understanding The choice you took was opting out Nevertheless, my love I will hold in my hand that white dove Look after it, caress it, until you return ============================================= DANIEL, I must say the above quotes are truly deep felt emotions that you penned into words leaving me in sighs.... This poem depicts 'True Love' The nevertheless ending portrays the ultimate in forgiveness when after I read this poem twice.... Thank you for sharing...  coco |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Coco, Thank you kindly, your words are very comforting. A lost love can return to the heart that wants to comfort it. The wait must never end. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
*outstanding* Snow |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Snow, Thank you, a simple and good reply. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
God knows this broke my heart! Such sorrow, such poetry in a beautiful plea for understanding. God bless. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
your love is a gift from heaven...so unselfish and filled with promises. touch my heart deeply. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Irish Rose, The true heart is in the waiting, and allowing a person to find themselves. Charisma, Thank you so much, love is so powerful. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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