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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2000-11-18 05:51 PM



Starlight Serenade


My love awaits!    Come out tonight!
Lovers serenade under blanket of starlight
Open up my dream and make mature my sight
As my heart awaits your breathless surrender
Behold God's heaven explodes with anew
We'll celebrate life in all of its splendor
Stars fall as lovers so frolicking do
Celestial Cupid on crystal sea
Rolling and... Rolling--
Your True Love
back to
me.




-Robert E. Michaud Jr.-


© Copyright 2000 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2000-11-18 06:00 PM


Beautiful word pictures..very very romantic and so nicely structured too..good stuff!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2000-11-18 06:13 PM


and a beautiful heart it is..


loved this

As my heart awaits your breathless surrender

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Celeste
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3 posted 2000-11-18 07:20 PM


"Lovers serenade under blanket of starlight"

Beautiful!  Loved that line especially!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

compassion
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4 posted 2000-11-18 07:28 PM


SSsshhh!! Bob, (whispering) don't let on we Christians can be romatics....nobody knows!!!
ya know I loved this one.

Tony Abbot
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5 posted 2000-11-18 07:43 PM


Lovely sentiments,wonderfully expressed.Enjoyed mucho.

'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

kaile
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6 posted 2000-11-19 06:07 PM


very creative...i enjoyed the visual art also
Victoria
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7 posted 2000-11-19 06:35 PM


loved it Bob..very creative indeed..thank you enjoyed...

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


VAS
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8 posted 2000-11-19 06:44 PM


lighthousebob...terribly creative and sweet!!

curious...do you work at a lighthouse or are you simply a lighthouse lover like I

Lighthousebob
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9 posted 2000-11-19 10:47 PM


ethome,

Thank you for your very kind comments. (blush)...and you said romantic? (double blush)  I am glad that you liked my feeble attempts at courtship.  Bob <><

Wynter,

I love that name... and I am glad that you think that my heart is beautiful.  May we not be in waiting long.  Bob <><

Dreamkeeper,

Now, I believe what you say about that line in that you are a keeper of dreams and all...
I can understand how a blanket of starlight can be a beautiful thing. Bob <><

Compassion,

I love your name as well!  I see that you have learned how to post the little smiley faces now...  Oh, and We will keep our little secrets. Luv Ya!  Bob <><

Tony,

Muchas Gracias Senor!  I am so glad that you liked it mucho.  I appreciate your kind responce.  Bob <><

Kaile,

You know us men... we are very visual.  Bob <><

Victoria,

I've enjoyed your posts as well and I must say that you are by far the more creative one, but I am glad that you enjoyed my heart.
Bob <><

VAS,

Hum.....  Yes I am a Light House Lover.
The lighthouse is a symbol of who I am.  I am a Christian which is a House filled with God's Light... and I am a Lover of Jesus Christ.  I am so glad that you are a lighthouse lover too.  

Poet deVine
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10 posted 2000-11-19 11:29 PM


Well, sir, I am mightily impressed with the heart..and very impressed with the poem. It's beautiful! May we use it in the Valentine issue of Digital Passions?
Lighthousebob
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11 posted 2000-11-19 11:45 PM


Sharon,

Yes

You have truly blessed me with your approval and your wanting to publish in the Valentine's Issue is a double blessing for me.  Thank you very much.  Bob <><

Big_Dude
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12 posted 2000-11-19 11:48 PM


Wonderful poetry,

Give your heart and recieve love anew!

Big_Dude

Butterflies_dont_cry
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13 posted 2000-11-19 11:49 PM


LH Bob* This is spectacular!! It will be a
joy to see it in the newsletter...but not to
take away from seeing it here...like a sneak
preview   the format only added to the
beauty in the imagery that you
wove...exquisite writing~


You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~

Lighthousebob
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14 posted 2000-11-20 12:12 PM


Big_Dude,

I believe a big

W E L C O M E

is firstly in order here.

...and now, I agree that if you give your heart that you will receive love anew.  Proof is in this post!  I gave my heart (my poem) and I have been lovingly received.  Thank you, Bob <><

Lighthousebob
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15 posted 2000-11-20 12:25 PM


Holly,

I am glad that you were able to view it here as well... because if not, I would have missed out on your appreciated comments.  Thanks for your support and kind words.  Bob <><  


jlocke
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16 posted 2000-11-20 10:28 AM


bob
beautiful imagery
beautiful love
<><

Love is the law, love under will.

Lighthousebob
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17 posted 2000-11-20 11:21 AM


J.Locke
As you know
His love is
Calling
Us all to
Come out...
Bob <><

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
18 posted 2000-11-20 01:12 PM


Anyone that has taken the time to read your poetry knows that the heart it comes from is one that is blessed with the silver of the heaven's in it and this piece really sparkles with that special appeal.  Loved it my friend and will be seeing you in SJ soon.  I have been a way for awhile doing the moving thing but I have not forgotten the map nor the route.
Lighthousebob
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19 posted 2000-11-20 01:42 PM


Mark,
(tripple blush) I forgot to include the silver lining... Hey, won't that last move be a doozie?  No packing and no unloading, we'll just show up as we are.  Thanks for the nice compliments and I am glad that your are back.
Bob <><

Sunshine
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20 posted 2000-11-20 02:03 PM


Bob, this is so great, having you share your wondrous gifts ALL OVER PASSIONS....whether here, or there, it is always so wonderful to see your name....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Lighthousebob
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21 posted 2000-11-20 02:18 PM


Sunshine,

I'm just a little light with a vast ocean before me.  I'm glad that you like my name.
Hey, did you know that BOB spelled backwards is....   Love Ya. Bob <><

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