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Dreamers Dream (Terzanelle)
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Dreamers Dream (Terzanelle) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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A calm silence can be heard within the still of the night dreamers dreams are stirred Hidden under the moonlight the dreams of the world exist within the still of the night The earth blanketed in mist underneath moonlit skies the dreams of the world exist Nature hears the sighs lovers fall in love underneath moonlit skies A silver moon shines above across the boundaries of space lovers fall in love Here in this quiet place across the boundaries of space calm silence can be heard dreamers dreams are stirred On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I love moonlight skies. That's when I have my open thoughts ramble on up to the stars. Joy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful poem!! very soft and inviting read .....enjoyed so much..moonlit writing for sure peaceful and calm and well done!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well, I for one, think this is one of your very best ever written..I shall save it in the library to be soothed by when needing to be. Thank you  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
No one's mentioned yet the difficulty of writing a terzanelle.This was a highly competent attempt,I enjoyed it a lot,you've put effort into this,I can tell. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful GS. . . dreaming right now. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Joy, when we can ramble to the stars......I think sometimes that's when I do some of my best ramblings. Thanks so much. *s* Ethome, thanks so much for such kind words. *s* Wynter, I am humbled...thanks so much. Tony, thank you. I did this as a challenge else where, and yes it is a very hard form to do and I had to think real hard to do it.....lol....there was probably even smoke from thinking so hard...*chuckles* Thank you. Sven, dreams my friend are what keeps us on a steady balance. Dream away, dream away..... Thanks!!  Thanks all, D On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is very well done... wonderful mystical imagery with the moons influence and the dreams essence and you have made the difficult format of this style of poem seem easy wonderful writing take care jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is splendid... It's great writing... Thank's for the read... coco |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Janet, thank you for the kind words. It was not easy for me, but it indeed was a challenge. Thanks. Thanks alot Coco, so kind you are. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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