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Foundation Of Love
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Foundation Of Love |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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A relationship is built on the grounds of trust, a bond made of faith is more than a must. Designed to rest upon pillars of understanding, without limitations, and with no demanding. The mortar is mixed with sharing and passion, stirred together well with caring and compassion. A structure built with room for compromise, void of jealousy, fear, and lies. All of these things complete the blueprints of, a relationship built upon a foundation of love. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The perfect set of blueprints is built on this special foundation. It's the strongest kind. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A wonderful reminder of what's important. . . Excellent. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A wonderful blueprint for love. May we use this poem in the Valentine's issue of Digital Passions? |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed, Michael |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
No wiser and more beautiful words have ever been woven...it looks so simple in black and white...but Love is the hardest house to build strong enough to last...excellent writing~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
inot, thanks for stopping in and leaving such kind words. Sven, thank you, I think sometimes we all need to look to see if the foundation is strong enough. PDV, it would truly be an honor for me to have this used, although I'm not yet sure what the digital passions is. Thanks! Thanks for breezing in Michael. *s* Yes Bdc, love most definately is the hardest house I've ever had to build, or even tear down. sigh.... thank you for your sweet words lady. *s* Thanks all, D On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
No truer words have ever been spoken in such a beautiful way... enjoyed this! -Tier |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Did this ever come at the right time in my life. You've nailed it, I love it! I can't say enough!! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
You certainly have the right mixture for it! Plus you worded it so well. I'd only add we make sure we're doing it all under God, who we're all accountable to. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That is just excellent writing the rhythum and rhyme scheme are perfect and the poetic offered wisdom is impeccable..just really good stuff!!...take care...ethome...... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks everyone, I appreciate each of you taking the time to leave such wonderful thoughts. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SPIRIT, this is excellent writing the message is splendid... I have found that once the foundation is built two sets of hands are needed to nurture its growth yet on the otherhand perhaps an ingredient was lacking... HMM now you got me thinking this is good SPIRIT I appreciate this kinda read... coco |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Coco, wow, thank you for the sweet words and for taking the time to read this. Thanks!! On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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