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Advantages of Vanilla ... acrostic
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Advantages of Vanilla ... acrostic |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Advantages of Vanilla...  A t morning's break, in myst-like fog D reams lost unto the real now borne V isions dancing, harvesting scenes A cross ocean of words, canvassed N akedthoughts doth embrace, enchant T ouch silent, cloak, scent images A float in mind of time, of want G roans of desire spilling over E dges, rising to meet the dark S culpting ever so strangely as o ften times you would appear, f orbidden, yet grand in stature V oicing, thy sweetness of words, once A mid seductive spell, to grace N ight visions of dark catching flight I n thine eyes, a touch, pale caress L ingering, upon lips, passions L onging, lasting well into nights A cross indigo darkness comes the advantages of vanilla... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done Wynter very nice..excellent metaphors made from select thoughts...great work!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you E. you are truly sooo nice... always ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Nak, This is just awesome, wonderful work, I bow to you. Excellent. "o ften times you would appear, f orbidden, yet grand in stature" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Wynter this is so devine  I'm never one to miss an acrostic if I can help it as I just love them and you have done a superb job....well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Daniel, thank you, no need to bow, but a hug, well who can resist one of those Tracie, thank you sooo much..sometimes I am inspired to write when I am challenged by something someone says to me in a response..and so that was what this was..me challenged  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wynter, my favorite. . . how did you know?? Just wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven, I didn't mean to slight you..was it the vanilla or the acrostic that is your favorite ~Wynter wondering "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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