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The Fire Sonnet

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Parker
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... the old black rum


25 posted 11-19-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Corinne, jeez and I thought that was an invite.... bummer..  

dg, yeah whats that old joke... more hose more hose... ok where's the fire..  

Kit, thank you, another burning comment.. things are getting just a little hot around here...  

Victoria, passion did you say passion... sure come get some ink then..  

Parker
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26 posted 11-20-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for Passions Voice   Email Passions Voice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Passions Voice

Well, it looks like you've heated things up with this one.

It's very good and I like the form very much.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


27 posted 11-20-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Parker my man...now this could melt the cold off of any heart you are seeking.  Lovely sonnet and yes, this cowboy was moved by it deeply, but we need not go into how much now do we?  You know that I love to find a sonnet in the blue pages and when it is one penned by you then I know going in that I am going to be treated to a very special moment and you have never failed in that area at all.  You shine my friend in a thousand ways.
Parker
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... the old black rum


28 posted 11-20-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

PV.... thanks for replying.

Mark, never enough heat in this place don't you think...  

Parker
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29 posted 11-20-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiersdin

Wow!  

"damn us both
to fiery hell's
heaven in your arms"

very niiiice...

-Tier
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30 posted 11-20-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It is a perfect sonnet  
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31 posted 11-20-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for Rainydays   Email Rainydays   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rainydays

Simply an echo, but just wanted to say "Well done."

Rainydays
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32 posted 11-21-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

btw...this makes an AWESOME bedtime story.........  

g

"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey
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Listening to every heart


33 posted 11-21-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


read to me by fire's flames
from memory of days gone old
when passion's fire was desire
and of the day when you were bold

Bravo....


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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with you


34 posted 11-21-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

~Parker~

Hello handsome!
This is wonderful
I could feel the heat.......
whew!

~SEA
Parker
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... the old black rum


35 posted 11-21-2000 04:15 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Tiersdin, thank you.  

Balladeer, thanks for the backup counting.  

Rainydays, well then thank you for the echo.  

dg, now we ain't talking about sleeping here are we..  

Sunshine, thank you very much for that.  

SEA, well thank you sexy.  

Parker
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36 posted 08-08-2003 06:56 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Wow Park, what you can do with words is beyond belief. Into my library it goes.

D

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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37 posted 08-21-2005 03:11 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

An absolutely perfectly done sonnet!  Beautiful!
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