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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
My edges are worn down fading from dark to light A million shades of gray You walk through with ease invading so much territory My tears splash and blur them even more To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
a very expressive and powerful write! excellent...truly loved this! take care. ~amy~ |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
short, it hits you right away right where it needs to and leaves you thinking. Great job, dream! Joy |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Thanks so much Aimster and Joy.....appriciate your comments!  To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Concise and emotionally resonant.Nice piece. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
dreamkeeper, This one says a lot. Powerful words that convey hidden torment. Nice writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Thanks so much Tony Abbot and Lone Wolf.. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a million shades of gray...WOW..do I know this! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent. . . To the point. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Saddened Moments Knows The Heart Grown Wise Yet In That Burgeoning The Pulse Resounds With Music New Light Shown Burns Away The Fog Mists Disappear In LovesEternalLight |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
We all feel like that sometimes. You chose some pretty strong and effetive words there. Everything ok, Kellie? |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
That's "effective". |
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