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Hold Me Once Again
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Hold Me Once Again |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I never know you would come into my life And make my life happy, When you take my hand And you said how much you love me, You hold me once again And make my dreams come true, you whispered the words, I was longing to hear, And when you said the things I never heard before, never thought you would hold me again, And you loved me once again, You hold me once again, And now I'm with you In your arms, I feel that I'm in heaven, Never thought, you would come into my life And hold me once again in my arms, Hold me once again And I could believe iin you forever and ever, That you're mine And would like you to hold me once again, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Is this to be a song...the repeating lines lead me to think that. I can almost hear a guitar strumming, but not in a 'country-western' way, just a gentle ballad manner. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ As always, you lay your heart so tenderly across the page. Beautiful thoughts, dear one. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Vandana, Well done, and good luck if it is going to be a song. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sometimes those simple hugs are worth their weight in gold...so soothing..I hope you get held once again....very very nice poem I enjoyed it!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you,Everyone!!!!!!!!!  |
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