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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-11-18 08:15 AM


Dark shadows playful,
For against warm candlelight,
Only them alive.

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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Nan
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1 posted 2000-11-18 09:01 AM


Shadows knowing all
Following in our footsteps
Watching from behind

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2 posted 2000-11-18 10:00 AM


Yes, interesting things shadows are, arent they?
nice observation

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3 posted 2000-11-18 04:39 PM


beautiful! i admire the talent to
be able to do this. i can't seem to
be able to pull it off. excellent!
take care.
~amy~

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4 posted 2000-11-19 09:53 AM


Nan - yeah, but sometimes the cheeky things get in front

Kaile - and spooky too thank u

amy - you'll get the hang of it i'm sure, just takes a bit of pratice



Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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