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Snow
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0 posted 2000-11-18 01:50 AM



Lovers Moon
one of my first attempts at Concrete Poetry..

                         Beneath the lovers
                      moon upon           a
                   rose petal
               bed trembl
             ing finger
            s touched
          foridden p
         laces with
         promises le
         ft unsaid th
         e man on the
         moon closed
         his eyes whi
         le lambent b
          reezes carried
           ecstatic moans
            of pleasure acro
              ss the dunes of tim        e
                   Beneath a Lovers Moon...


'99


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Snow
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain
1 posted 2000-11-18 01:51 AM


i have a hard time
formatting on this
board, it actually
did have more of a
crecent shape before
posting it.

Snow

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
2 posted 2000-11-18 02:15 AM


You did a good job though, even so   And the poem itself is lovely!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

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