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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Winters Apparel The way I see this... is that it must be wonderful to sit in judgment I'm sure you believe you're safe and comfortable there with a wall to protect you from the elements of winters harsh chill Someday, maybe I'll give it a try. Putting on a pseudo suit of someone who has a compassionate heart Writing of a life I've never experienced But then again... I have better taste... in clothes |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
oh, I like this!!! Especially the end; now that is a subtle slam!!!  Good job!Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
pepper.. lol! I'm glad you liked it. ;-) subtle it is, but not so much the intended didn't get it..*evil laugh* s~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
snow- this was a different read, and very interesting  ...glad the intended gotyour message. great piece! take care. ~amy~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Snow- wow..i like this alot! you definitely got your point across in this one. excellent!! hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Ouch. Definitely got your point across in this one. Good read.  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent Snow. . . very subtle at the end. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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