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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
Never been on a blind date before So I thought I should try it out Wanted to maybe find a new friend And see what it all was about So my friend picked you to date me Out of all the rest But I guess what she was thinking Wasn't really for the best We had fun at the restaurant I thought it was so nice that you paid But I would've picked up the tab If I would've known you were looking to get laid Back at the house we started kissing Your tongue was running along my mouth I was really getting into it Until you started heading south And I pushed you away and said, "Stop! That's a violation of my body!" And it was so hard for me to say Because you were such a hottie But I guess you had earwax build-up You just wouldn't quit Tears started rolling as I shouted, "Stop!" and "I mean it!" I looked down to see your hands And my pants coming undone Grabbing the buttons on my shirt And undoing them one-by-one It was all over in a few minutes Minutes that felt like eternity Didn't you realize that was date rape When you were doing that to me? I wish you would've listened When I said, "NO!" Put up my red light, but you saw green And thought that it meant, "Go" And my friend felt so bad That she had set me up with you I said that maybe I should've been more assertive But she said, "Girl, you shouldn't have to." A guy should never expect anything Just because he buys you dinner And just because he's good-looking Doesn't make him a winner And no matter how many times you say, "No" There will always be one guy who doesn't hear So be careful what you get yourself into And always keep that fear < !signature--> "Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without." [This message has been edited by Words_of_Glitter (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is a topic that should be high on the awareness list!!! If this is personal for you, I hope you've gotten some help with this; counseling is always a good thing... Take care, Pepper Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
WOG- this is a very SERIOUS topic. how did this get to page 5 with only ONE response...eeeks  ...great write, full of emotion...if this happened to you, i'm truly sorry. *hugs* and as pepper said hope you are getting counceling. take care.~amy~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Powerful message, and a painful reminder to anyone who has experienced it. I can only hope that this isn't a true story. Still, it's a good "heads up" to us all... -Tier |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know if I were you he would'nt get away with that without going through some serious legal action....a kiss is a kiss but beyond that has to be totally consensual...if this in fact happened to you then I'd do something about it...if it's just a warning message I understand and you should be commended for bringing the subject to the fore and putting it in writing....it happens all the time and it definitely shouldn't!! Great to read your work!!...take care ....ethome....... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
If he's so good looking, he should really do well in prison. Corinne |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
No should always mean NO... and one should always be very careful to try and avoid the situation where they are put into this situation...a tragedy that things like this occur... my heart felt pain for circumstances leading to this poem~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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