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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-11-18 12:29 PM




Fantasy Time Charisma Mine

green on green
a fantasy
eye to eye
do you dream
charisma serene

come about
come what may
come along
come today
see a dream

see here
see how
see now
take bows
talk is lean

surprise!
sunrise
sun shines
practice gleam
fantasy time

you are mine
in moonlight
in sunshine
fantasy time
charisma ~ mine



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-11-18 12:35 PM


and do you have such wunnerful charisma i likes it
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2 posted 2000-11-18 08:46 AM


{~,^} thank you Walt...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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3 posted 2000-11-18 01:56 PM


*sigh*

*sigh*

*sigh*

wow. . . three sighs. . . practically unheard of. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 11-18-2000).]

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4 posted 2000-11-18 04:57 PM


Kari, I don't know how I missed this one love, but I obviously did. I try not to you know but sometimes these pages seem to move so fast. This is an absolutely amazingly astoundingly ace piece of work. Wonderful, and you have charisma in abundance. Fabulous
love, and I love this one too.
Take care
            Majestic Marsha
                    
                        
              

doreen peri
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5 posted 2000-11-18 05:12 PM


well, as sven said.... that's about the sighs of it  

enjoyed this, karilea

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6 posted 2000-11-18 05:40 PM


Totally just fab stuff like only you can do! Can't sigh so swoon swoon swoon...almost unheard of too!!
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7 posted 2000-11-18 07:11 PM


*WOW*....love it....thoroughly, great and wonderful piece.....well done.

Charisma

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8 posted 2000-11-19 07:19 AM


see the sighs only Sven can do...

Marsha, keeping up with the Boards is a monumental task...thanks so much for finding me...I thought I had lost myself! {~,^}

doreen, you're WAY too cute  

ethome, that's a whole lot of swooning going on... but thank you!

Charisma, so very glad you enjoyed this! Thank you!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Marsha
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9 posted 2000-11-24 06:59 PM


Bumping this up, that's why I missed this before, this is an excellant work love. Wonderful and I still love it.
Take care
                 MM
                  
(Oh! I know, but I'm not a wicked sprite, don't giggle over me as a sprite no matter how improbable or unlikely.    It is fun love   )


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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10 posted 2000-12-15 11:24 AM


Marsha, your sprite and my imp are on wonderful speaking terms, thank you...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




emily
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11 posted 2000-12-15 11:25 AM


how sweet and magical.

Emily


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12 posted 2000-12-15 11:40 AM


*sigh* Bravo!!Oh well done. I love it. Much love to you from me.
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13 posted 2000-12-15 12:07 PM


Your charisma definitely is NOT a fantasy my friend.  Wonderful read and I am sorry that I missed it before but hey, better late than absent.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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