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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-17 11:30 PM


With the pen in her hands
Revealing her life
I can see
The stories of her heart
Echoing across the page

Offering comfort
Nuturing many

Knowing that with
Every sunrise
There will be
Hope in the new day
Revealing her life, her heart to
You

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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rosepetals25
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1 posted 2000-11-17 11:54 PM


Sven,

    What a sweet tribute to a wonderful poet

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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2 posted 2000-11-17 11:57 PM


a lovely acrostic sven..she will enjoy it

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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3 posted 2000-11-18 12:21 PM


Kethry is a beautiful poet and deserves this praise  
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4 posted 2000-11-18 12:33 PM


She will fly, seeing this...
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5 posted 2000-11-18 01:07 AM


Very beautiful tribute, from a great Poet.
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6 posted 2000-11-18 01:29 AM


It's perfect for her, Sven   Great job!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Kethry
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7 posted 2000-11-18 04:28 AM


Sven,
I'm speechless. A first for me. *HuGS*
Write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

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8 posted 2000-11-18 06:31 AM


This is so nice Sven...



K

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

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9 posted 2000-11-18 08:30 AM


this iis lovely

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.


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10 posted 2000-11-18 10:17 AM


Beautiful...for isnt this the reason we all write?

and i like the concise way you expressed these thoughts too

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11 posted 2000-11-18 01:54 PM


rp, thank you for reading. . .  

Victoria, thank you my friend. . .

Balladeer, thank you also. . . she is a wonderful person. . .

Sunshine, I think that she did. . .  

inot2B, thank you!  

Pepper, that's what I wanted to hear. . . thank you. . .

K, glad that you enjoyed. . .  

Maria, thank you my friend. . .

Kaile, indeed it is my friend, and thank you. . .

Kethry, I'm sitting here amazed that you're speechless. . .    My friend, your words have done much for me and for all of us. . . thank you for them and in the spirit of friendship. . . write on    

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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12 posted 2000-11-18 04:29 PM


sven...

what a lovely poem you have penned
for a lovely poet. i agree her words
have healed many of us. she is a great
person/poet as are you. im very impressed
with what you're doing! take care.
~amy~

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13 posted 2000-11-18 05:05 PM


Sven, lovely tribute to one of Passions best. I am sure she loved this!!
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14 posted 2000-11-18 08:24 PM


Sven,

Lovely writing.  I see her just like that!!  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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15 posted 2000-11-19 02:14 AM


Sven, this one of Kethry that you write
Is a touching tribute to a special
LadyPoetFriend of all of ours...



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16 posted 2000-11-19 02:32 AM


Sven:  How lovely this is - a great tribute to Kethry - I can't believe she would be speechless, she has such style in her writings as do you Sir    Roniece  
Sven
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17 posted 2000-11-19 02:48 PM


Amy, thank you as always my friend. . . glad that you're enjoying. . .

GS, I'm sure that she did also. . .thank you. . .

LW, then I have done well. . . thanks for reading. . .  

poetfriend Coco, thank you. . .  

Roniece, I was surprised to see her speechless as well. . . thank you  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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18 posted 2000-12-04 05:15 AM


Sven
Loved the way you put this one together, very fitting my friend..well done
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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19 posted 2000-12-04 06:09 AM


Perfectly written for one sweet lady
Startime
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20 posted 2000-12-04 11:44 AM


OH YES, OH YES.Oh Sven, she is all of those things. You and your writing are simply delightful. I love it. Thank you so very much. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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