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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
*Forever* In your eyes the day we met The feeling was just like mine Till death us do part ~~***~~ Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this gaze, compassion eyes meet mine, in sweetness-- eyes--of light, sublime... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Daniel- so much said in so few words.  beautiful!! hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Till death us do part I said it and will stand by it till death. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Serenity, This was my first attempt. I just had to do it. The challenge was immense. Sunshine, That summed it all. Cheers vlraynes, It is all very true. Thank you Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Inot, Thank you, I am certain you will. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Simplicity, beauty and honesty...all packed in one small package!!! Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Peppermint, Thank you kindly, your thoughts are much appreciated. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very cleverly done Daniel...good one!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Daniel- ahhhh true love! what bliss beautifulpoem...liked this! take care. ~amy~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You've been taking lessons Daniel this is excellent and for your first attempt....I'm just going to stand back and be ready for the next ones...because to warn you...these little gems are addicting...lol Excellent writing!! You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
a few words that speak volumes... very nice... -Tier |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Ethome, Aimster, Butterflies, Tiersden, Thank you all for the replies, and Butterflies, I will take note of your advice. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Like this much!!!!!! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Vandana, You are so sweet, Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes this is the way it is suppose to be. How wonderful you have put it in so few words. Delightful. I love the talent of your words. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hi my friend...this is simply perfect...my heart to yours |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
awww..this is more in less words in its finest...enjoyed it muchly  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
so well said....simple the truth Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Startime, Paula, Kaile, and Charisma, Thank you kindly for your wonderful replies. May love envelope you all. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yeppers they are addicting but as long as you pen them this well, I don't think you will find yourself complaining about it. We won't either, this was a wonderful first SUCCESS!!!!!! A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
WOW... Ummmmm... That's all ..just.. WOW... ~LL~< !signature-->The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Mark, Thank you for the compliment. Much appreciated. Lady lightning, Thank you for the great Wow's. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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