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Everything Exists Forever
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Everything Exists Forever |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Everything Exists Forever Oceans transfix the sandy shore Ever mixing present and past. Forever merging making more But non will ever come to last. The hand of new is never done It circles in eternal lease Enzymes chyme is forever spun The sands of time will never cease. And the elements sing their song Reacting to the heat and cold Weather quick in rupture or long The new forever turns to old. Illusion is the rhyme and chime All that is will forever be Illusion is the face of time What ever is will always be. I tell you true there is nothing new. It only seems that way to you. Existence to us is quite serious but Being here is totally mysterious. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ I realy like the thoughts you expressed here......very cool  _SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ah, yes, conservation of matter. Everything will always be, but not always in the form we see. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
The hand of new is never done It circles in eternal lease Enzymes chyme is forever spun The sands of time will never cease. Wonderful poem. Everything is as one being, forever bound to becomings. Enjoyed the read. -Poeminister < !signature--> "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 11-17-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour you've gone on quite a philisophical trip here...your right, time will never die and forever will always be, time will change things into different shapes and forms, oceans will eventually erode cliffs and wind and rain will wear down mountains..until another cycle goes through..I love the last part...we take life serious.. but can't explain the mystrey of our own consciousness and our abilty to reason and plan ahead???? Hey man at leat you've got the courage to write about this....good stuff!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent thoughts, Sy...everything on earth is permanent....but us  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
enzymes chyme poets rhyme all sing thanksgiving rings for Sy |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
It is a mystery indeed. Nothing new, we just keep recyling. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oceans transfix the sandy shore Ever mixing present and past. Forever merging making more But non will ever come to last. The hand of new is never done It circles in eternal lease Enzymes chyme is forever spun The sands of time will never cease. =================== your so wise and cool it hurts ... but it hurts sooooo gooood  *winkiewinkie* =============== We are a circle of light unbroken, only love and poetry will remain ... keeping the secrets still unspoken, no questions left to answer ... no promises of time to be broken. Fate's gift of renewal found in the past poetic wisdom written in stone ... lessons learned ... truths to last, constant as the seasons change ... evolutions incantation has been cast. We are lyric, verse, and rhyme, we are bound to the the shifting sands of time ... we are destiny's design. jm ************ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Seymour, Well done, I like your vision. Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Your pretty cool yourself. Vas, To me our concept of time is out of wack, glad you enjoyed. Poeminister Good comment thank you. Ethome, Nice comment, thanks for the good stuff. Balladeer, You got that right. Sunshine, Enzymes chyme poets rhyme. *L* inot2B, Yep you just keep recycling. JM, Out out brief candle, lifes but a walkig shadow, a poor player that struts and frets his hour upon the stage and then is heard no more t'is a tale told by an idiot full of sound and fury signifying nothing. Winkiewinkie. Daniel, Thanks for the cheers. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Seymour, I snuck in to take a peak at this poem and I now take a few seconds to let you know I enjoyed this read... Thankyou Coco |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CocoBaci, Glad you snuck in and took a peek, thank you. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sy* Your weave gives me a reason to pause and ponder this glorious Sunday morning Thank you for your words of poetic wisdom..there's just no one that can weave like you!! You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We also exist forever..in our words. And you will in yours and in your art. Beautiful poem sir.  |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
wonderful! I really loved how the words create such vivid images in one's mind... enjoyed! -Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Sy. . . just what I was thinking of this very morning. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Butterfly, Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. Poet deVine, A beautiful word from a beautiful soul. Tiersdia, Glad you enjoyed. Sven, Excellent response. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Great expression, Seymour! I love it! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Time is such a trickster weaving in sublime then turning it around until it's made into a rhyme Sy...I love the way you think! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, Thank you for the WOW. Martie, Love you and the way you write. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Sly, Sy... Poetic sleight of hand, good writing. Rainy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rainydays, Perhaps, thank you for the read. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Another great one, Seymour... I especially like the last verse! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A brilliant poem Written beautifully, as always Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A soft and lovely compliment. Sy |
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krysalis Junior Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 22 |
CLAPPING! Perfect rhyme to this! I really enjoyed this one... it flowed with grace and said much! |
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