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Gman
New Member
since 2000-11-16
Posts 2


0 posted 2000-11-17 06:27 PM


I am death
I am your friend
Give me your breath
And I'll give you the end

No more pain
NO more sorrow
No more rain
With no more tomorrow

Come with me
Take my hand
I'll set you free
To roam my land

What's wrong
Don't be mad
After you gone
Yeah, they'll be sad

But don't worry
You'll live on
In every snow flurry
And every song



© Copyright 2000 Gman - All Rights Reserved
Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2000-11-17 06:53 PM


Gman,
Welcome to Passions. Although the message is not an appropriate one, I see loads of talent here.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

inot2B
Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-11-17 06:55 PM


Welcome to this Family of Friends.
Your poem was very good, but if you don't mind I'm not going to welcome death until my last breath. Let's not hurry it too soon.

Poeminister
Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
3 posted 2000-11-17 07:25 PM


Gman,
Welcome!  Nicely written.

Poeminister

"One short sleepe past, wee wake eternally,  
And death shall be no more, death, thou shalt die!"
--John Donne

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-11-17 07:26 PM


Welcome to Passions, this is to the point and direct.  Look forward to reading more.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2000-11-17 08:09 PM


Gman-
powerful write. welcome to passions!
looking forward to reading more from
you. take care.
~amy~

SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
6 posted 2000-11-17 08:14 PM


Gman~ Welcome!   Looking forward to reading more......... -SEA
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2000-11-18 09:07 PM


kinda spooky message here Gman...but I know what you mean, I've often thought the same way. Welcome!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
8 posted 2000-11-18 09:22 PM


Gman: Welcome to Passions - an interesting read - I hope we will see more of your poetry - mmmm do you write any about living?   Roniece  
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