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Senryu You.........My first attempt at this!
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Senryu You.........My first attempt at this! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Senyru You Beating heart of new Knowledgeable past soul learnt Beginning again Marina Nov 17 2000 It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WOW!!! I like this so much! Fantastic!  -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes ..speaks of wisdom..enjoyed marina.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Great senryu.... you learnt well. James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Marina. . . you had a good teacher my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
poet's heart keeps time destiny seen in jade eyes quiet comfort found  senyru suits you Marina-girl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
to venture forward with lessons learnt from the past...lovely sentiments here |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
wonderful Marina. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Bravo! I also attempted to fumble around with this type of form this morning but came up empty. You did great! Congrads! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Marina ... you've captured this thought beautifully in so few words, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Oh, just wanted to add the 5-7-5 seems to be right on.... those counting lessons are working out well....  James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Gee, thanks James! Does mean I learned it well or learnt it good??  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would say that you done did good. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 This Senryu is definitely you...And I agree, you've learnt it to a tee! Bob <>< [This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love the way so much can be conveyed so well with so few words. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sea,thank you so much! Victoria, I am not sure if it is wisdom. Perhaps just a theory. Thank you. James, thank you. I must admit though, I had my editor look it over. Jan, I love your little Senyru! Kaile, thank you. PV, thank you so much. Dreamkeeper, thank very much. Believe me, I fumbled myself on this. Keep trying...you'll get it! Yes James those counting lessons are really coming along. Tomorrow, I am going to teach you to tie your own shoes!!! Bob, thank you my friend. Eagle One, thank you. It is truly amazing what you can communicate to others with such few words. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
A beautiful thought. Well written. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done!! learnt well!! ethome |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Martinque, thank you. Ethome, thanks very much. I hope to keep learning. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Poet's heart aglow in Passionate radiance setting minds afire ==================== Lovely senyru from a lovely poet!!!!!!!! So nice to find you reaching out my friend. Senyrus definitely agree with you and your will to experience new and exciting things. Keep on stretching and growing. |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Had to come back to add this to my Library. Hope that you don't mind. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Had to come back to add this to my Library. Hope that you don't mind. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Mark my sweet friend, thank you so much. I am of late, trying to stretch myself a little more. Thank you again... PV, thank you. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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