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Strings of the Wind |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Gentle fingertips of springtime plucks the fragrance in the wind mockingbirds mimic bluebirds sienna breasted robins sing Silken petals dance like confetti brighten the morn with their ballet butterflies flaunt their fan dance in their kaleidoscope exotic way Behind our oriental screen is our sheet music of lilac gold tucked away safe within your arms forever a painting to behold Strings of the wind never to pluck adieu lost within your eyes..eyes of midnight blue A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is very beautiful and I enjoyed it much! Lovely images! "butterflies flaunt their fan dance" I love this line! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
'Silken petals dance like confetti brighten the morn with their ballet butterflies flaunt their fan dance in their kaleidoscope exotic way' Victoria, this is a beautiful poem, I liked this part best!  -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-17-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Debbie and Sea..nice to hear from both of you.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ This is just a beautiful work of word art. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Marge..nice to hear from you..and have a great Thanksgiving.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, yet another finely crafted poem...passion and nature rhyming. Robert Joseph |
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LastOfThe New Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 9 |
"sheet music of lilac gold" Great line, vividly invoking rich imagery. A pleasure to read. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Victoria, this was a very lovely sweet read... much enjoyed. Parker |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, as always, Victoria!! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Softly enjoyable...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Robert..thank you Robert..always nice to hear from you last of the....thank you so much..and for taking time to read... Parker..Thank you Parker..So glad you enjoyed Denise..Thank you..Nice to hear from you Denise.. James..Thank you James..glad you liked.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Victoria~ This is really beautiful silken petals dance like confetti brighten the morn with their ballet Loved this much! Deb |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Deb..nice of you to visit..glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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