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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-11-17 10:30 AM


Remember These

When you smile at me with sight
Caressing me in fading light
Craving touches, gentle love
Needed words, your guidance of.

Each morning fills my senses so
Sighing, warming in the glow
Released by you in waves to find
My hopes of real, those dreams of mind.

As daytime swirls to eve's decline
I hold your hand as you hold mine
In loving arms and lips of kiss
Comforting in nighttime bliss.

Remember these, the words once shared
In silent speak in echo's lair
My favorite lines will end my thoughts
In velvet strappings, yours, I'm caught.

"Till sleep takes talk, to dreams light
You slip to dream, my day's last sight."

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-11-17 10:38 AM


"you slip to dream..."

Masterful!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




SEA
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2 posted 2000-11-17 10:38 AM


Wynter~ yes, this is so beautiful.......wow.... -SEA
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2000-11-17 10:44 AM


thank you Karilea, those words are his that I hold in my heart...


~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2000-11-18 08:11 AM


SEA-  thank you for the *wow* I dont get to  see that too ofen and it let's me know I got through to you {{huggzz}

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



CocoBaci
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5 posted 2000-12-04 01:30 AM



Wynter, what a lovely treasure I found here...

Thank you for the enjoyable read...

coco

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