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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2000-11-17 08:45 AM



After the symphony...

The knowledge that you exist
in all your beauty
sends my mind reeling
among thousands of
unnamed stars
Each, a work of art
yet, I'd wager,
unable to hold a flame
to you,
for the shimmers
in your eyes are limitless...

-R.T.
{Tiersdin}



© Copyright 2000 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-17 08:49 AM


R.T., WELCOME to Passions...this is a most lovely entrance into a wonderful world! I hope you will take the time to explore, enjoy, sit back and relax, and come to know all of us in time.

and check your e-mail for a special message.


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Celeste
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2 posted 2000-11-17 09:01 AM


I am so THRILLED to see you here!  (   says Kellie! )   A diamond added to the group.   You've made my day.  Have missed your writing so much!  Excellent, R.T.!!!!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-11-17 09:07 AM


I am aware that you have shared some beautiful feelings here in a very romantic way....James
SEA
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RT~ WELCOME!   This made me *SIGH* loved this   -SEA
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-11-17 10:41 AM


Tiersdin~
This is a lovely entrancing piece.
Welcome to this family of poets !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-11-17 10:49 AM


WELCOME!
This was absolutely beautiful! I loved it!
What a way to make an entrance, and I can't wait to read more!!  

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD

Rosebud1229
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7 posted 2000-11-17 02:01 PM


awesome, I loved every line, look forward to more.
Nan
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8 posted 2000-11-17 06:14 PM


Hello, R.T. - Welcome to our Passionate home.. It's a wonderful place, and your poetry looks like it'll find a good home here... Settle in and make yourself comfy..
snowpants
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9 posted 2000-11-17 06:14 PM


'The knowledge that you exist
in all your beauty
sends my mind reeling
among thousands of
unnamed stars'

Excellent write, Tiersdin!  Love it!!
Welcome to Passions!  

sp

I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

aurora rain
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10 posted 2000-11-17 06:18 PM


beau-ti-FUL. an enchanting read. left me mesmerised.
Charisma
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11 posted 2000-11-17 06:23 PM


Welcome to passions.....and this is a wonderful entrance......excellent work.
love it


Charisma

Daniel J D
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12 posted 2000-11-17 06:31 PM


Tiersden,
Welcome to the real Symphony at Passions. Good start.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Severn
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13 posted 2000-11-17 06:59 PM


Lovely work - short and simple and eloquent...

welcome to our home...

K

The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

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14 posted 2000-11-17 07:16 PM


Wow! What an entrance! This is a lovely poem, welcome to the family. I look forward to reading a lot more from you.  
Irish Rose
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15 posted 2000-11-17 07:21 PM


This is stunning. Welcome to Passions. I was so taken by this, especially the text format you selected. It is very, very welcome and look forward to reading more.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



Aimster
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16 posted 2000-11-17 10:53 PM


Hello and welcome to Passions! this
was beautiful, a stunning first piece.
truly romantic and wonderful! looking
forward to reading more from you.
take care.
~amy~

Balladeer
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17 posted 2000-11-17 11:25 PM


a very sincere and romantic piece, good poet. You are very welcome here..........
A Whisper's Caress
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18 posted 2000-11-17 11:51 PM


welcome to passions!!!!!!!!

what a GRAND entrance


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Victoria
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19 posted 2000-11-18 12:15 PM


very lovely and romantic indeed..and welcome to Passions..

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Paula Finn
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missouri
20 posted 2000-11-18 02:04 AM


MMMMM yes...so very aware...this is lovely...welcome to our world
kaile
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21 posted 2000-11-18 10:09 AM


i have a soft spot for short poems and i absolutely loved the depth of emotion you expressed within so few words...

will be looking forward to more

oops, and WELCOME!

bsquirrel
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22 posted 2002-09-16 06:21 PM


And so a star is born.

.m.

passing shadows
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displaced
23 posted 2003-01-27 10:12 AM


beautiful!
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