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Kissed by Reflection

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


0 posted 11-17-2000 06:33 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts

Kissed by Reflection

Reaching out
to touch the morning
dare to rest
upon each leaf

Saran-wrapped thoughts
ever begging
inside, memories
nightmare's thief

Whisper kisses
holding onto
butterfly feelings
soon to rise

Morning dew from lips,
impressions
mind taped pictures
behind closed eyes

Once upon a time
of loving
Princes rode upon
their white

Stallions all,
captivating
into the dark,
a soul to light

The lady sins,
becomes then nameless
shamed reflections
crystal clear

Iced the hurting
eyes of velvet
bruised, the want
to disappear

Naked now
her thoughts before her
dressed, undressed
no change occurs

For kisses only,
soft and gentle
morning's touch
in her, prefers

So, awaits
the dew of morning
knowing where
it hides it's draw

Sketched in hues
in subtle colours
shades of bluing
cover all

Always
is a "never ending"
fairy tales,
forever mores

Reflections, kiss
each day's story
when comes the opening
of morning's door.

~Wynter




"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




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Kethry
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1 posted 11-17-2000 07:08 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

nkedthoughts,
waht a complex and lovely poem and how cool is this part.
Saran-wrapped thoughts
ever begging
inside, memories
write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford
Celeste
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2 posted 11-17-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for Celeste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Celeste

OH WOW..........I'm speechless.  Outstanding writing.   I applaud your style and skill.  Wow...........

To capture and live a moment is truly living
Victoria
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3 posted 11-17-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

lovely nt..enjoyed your words and the rhythm too..

           ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Rosebud1229
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4 posted 11-17-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

you've captured the reflection of each day in an amazing way, each day brings out new beginnings of an ever amazing story told.
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 11-18-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

you are very astute Kethry, this was more complex than most will know. Thanks

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


ethome
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6 posted 11-18-2000 08:17 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Love that title..."Kissed By Reflection" it really sets up the rest of the poem so well..
"whisper kisses
holding onto
butterfly feelings
soon to rise"

soft and warm

"Reflections, kiss
each day's story
when comes the opening
of morning's door."

UMMM nice mood makes you want to create!!
Moon Dust
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7 posted 11-18-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for Moon Dust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moon Dust

This is light flowing and sweet. its left me all light headed

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 11-19-2000 06:45 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

dreamkeeper- you may stay speechless but remember to type ok?...

~V~ thanks again, one thing I do have is rhythm  

Rosebud- your words were so sweet, thank you
for reading  

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Marsha
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9 posted 11-19-2000 08:13 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Wynter, this is a very well written piece, it's a lot more complex than it at first appears. Wonderful writing from you, interwoven with many deep threads. I really love this one. Well done excellant work.

Take care
                 Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
nakdthoughts
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10 posted 04-19-2011 06:09 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

again~~ the past in present thought this day~~

M
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