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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-11-17 02:31 AM


Heaven Scent

the candlelight flickers~~
steam dressed porcelain giving
a glimpse of shadowed memories
as they dance in a heated tango

the soft terry stimulates~~
tingles rise bumps on
flesh that was ravished
until it glowed

and his scent rises~~
against her soul, pressing
another image into her
heart


and the rain falls....
and her dreams begin...
and her heart aches
for that moment...
that time, when his lips
pressed tightly against
her own..
when drops of heaven tasted...
of him



[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 11-17-2000).]

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peppermint35
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1 posted 2000-11-17 02:43 AM


sigh   romantic feelings, so warm and wonderful

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-11-17 02:50 AM


Snow-
  I just LOVE reading your work!  
  this is another wonderful write.
  i love the lovely, romantic picture
  you've painted with your words.  
  excellent!  

  hugs,
  -vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
3 posted 2000-11-17 03:13 AM


pepper...thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.

vicky...you are so sweet! I love to get your replies! this piece is very special to me, so I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much!

Snow

Charisma
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4 posted 2000-11-17 07:32 AM


love it....so ful of romantic and warm feelings.....well done.

Charisma

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2000-11-17 07:43 AM


Beautiful poem... tenderly romantic...

-Tier

snowpants
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6 posted 2000-11-17 08:02 AM


Whew.  Yes, very romantic write!  Love it!!

sp  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Robert Joseph
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7 posted 2000-11-17 03:03 PM




Neve, like a kiss that lingers...your words leave me wanting more .

  ~ek~ Robert Joseph

Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 2000-11-17 03:06 PM


Steam rose from this sensual weave...nothing
like the first kiss upon your soul....this
was exquisite~


You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~

Aimster
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9 posted 2000-11-17 06:04 PM


snow-
this is very beautiful! awesome images
you have penned. great poem! looking
forward to reading more. take care.
~amy~

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10 posted 2000-11-17 11:16 PM


wonderful Snow. . . spoken like a True Romantic. . . we need more of those. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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11 posted 2000-12-31 04:15 PM


Suddenly I have a yearning for something salty...and that smells of Old Spice...

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
12 posted 2000-12-31 05:05 PM


this is one of my favorites, i'm glad to see you enjoyed it as much as i did, when writing it ;-)

thank you for all of the wonderful replies.

snow

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

maxtec1
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13 posted 2000-12-31 05:41 PM


Big Romantic Sigh  I loved this. it feels so warm and fuzzy. great writing.
love and light,
Richard

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