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FlyHigh
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 84
Bekkestua, Norway

0 posted 2000-11-17 01:51 AM


five suns
the smile that radiates so much bliss
that slowly heals a soul on fire
and boosts the feeling of being missed
forever increasing the highest desire

the smile that swoops down to take me away
that let's me bask in the glare forever
the warmth to save a sodden stray
as if I could be without it, no never

gJ

--
"Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish."
Ovid (BC 43-18 AD)


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peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
1 posted 2000-11-17 02:40 AM


I bask in the warmth of this poem   Good work!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-11-17 04:08 AM


Simply beautiful
thanks for sharing it with us
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-11-18 07:45 AM


FlyHigh,
what a warm and loving poem
write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

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