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FlyHigh
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since 2000-06-21
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Bekkestua, Norway

0 posted 2000-11-17 01:35 AM


Umbrellaman

Darkness haunts the umbrellaman,
as he waits in his prison of salt.
For very long has he been teased,
and he is stuck there none to pleased.
"Stay away", the whisper calls.
Darkness haunts the umbrellaman,
but we have no fear for now.
He will stay that way until that day
the umbrella finally falls.

Then I will fear the umbrellaman,
and hide in the deepest hole,
for then he will finally get his pay,
his revenge in a field full of gore.
Then I will whisper "Stay away!",
and hide in my cave like a boar.
So stay away from the umbrellaman,
and for God's sake, tease him no more.


gJ

This must be the silliest I have ever written.. OMG I am tired. =)



--
"Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish."
Ovid (BC 43-18 AD)


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inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
1 posted 2000-11-17 03:18 AM


It is the middle of the night and raining at my house. If I promise not to tease you will you make it stop raining.

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
2 posted 2000-11-17 03:22 AM


I have to say...
I like it!!

Snow

FlyHigh
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 84
Bekkestua, Norway
3 posted 2000-11-17 04:23 AM


inot2B: I can't promise anything, but I have tried to avert the skies.. However, I enjoy a good tease. =)

Snow: Thanks for liking it.. =)

gJ

--
"Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish."
Ovid (BC 43-18 AD)


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2003-06-06 12:43 PM


Interesting write....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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