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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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ink-night sky. colored eye. cream and rye. slow-felt burn. gears all turn. align and learn. moon's lectern. wet window. where to go. the blue snow. oh, one more sigh. oh, one more lie. frosted fern; burning sky. wet glass pane. frozen rain. where you've lain. blue snowprints. morning tints. her dawn-warmed lips; gold peppermints. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
the title pulled me in but the words kept me here reading!!! I loved it! Snow |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Lovely.. =) gJ -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very different...have you ever seen a blue snow for real? ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ this is one awesome poem!  -SEA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mike- wonderful! i like your style. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Snow, Glad you enjoyed. FlyHigh, Thanks. nakdthoughts, Very different question. SEA, Always glad to see you. Thanks for reading and for the smiley face.vlraynes, Thank you. Mike |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
big sigh..wish I'd have been there for this one...exquisite mike, a portraiture---left me longing...hugs to heart. and hey...added this just so you, and every body else would know..about snow...changing colors with the longing of the light...a beautiful, metaphor, by the way...and thank you much, me friend. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
S'en, Thanks. It's based on something a real close friend told me when I was on the phone with her till very early in the morning, when the sky was just turning to dawn and it was reflected in the snow. That's about as sexy as it gets, though. Everything was written alone in dark apartment. Interesting set piece. Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ 'blue snowprints. morning tints. her dawn-warmed lips; gold peppermints.' Just perfection in thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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