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Not in The Mood (product of 16 hour slumber and being tired of slamming doors) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Peaceful roaming, Takes on a more urgent grasp, While my cares and worries, Drift out the window, Of a self created cage. I don't care. Can't you see, About your angst, And your inabilities. Your losses, And your hardships. Tonight, I'd rather read, And feel what I wanted, Instead of what, I'm being brained with. Lets just talk about, My muse for once. Hit by a barrage of messages, About lonely strangers, Seeking unreachable answers. Well, tonight, Don't look here for them. I'm not sitting here, Waiting for you to wine. I'm sitting here waiting, For your words, To rub my shoulders, And paint my inspirations. Do you ever feel used? I certainly do. When this isn't poetry, What do we call it? Where are the boundaries? Love and lust, Friendship and pain. Tonight was too full of slammed doors, And geesh.. I didn't want to talk to them anyway. So is it sour grapes? Maybe, But hey.. Its my defense. Deal with it. Tomorrow you'll love me, And accept me as the friend I am, Because thats what friends do. Tonight you'll tell me, I have an attitude, And tomorrow you'll forgive me for it. Tonight I'll keep my attitude, And tomorrow I'll apologize for it. Sooo.. Right now, Why don't you just back off? As for everyone else. Slammed doors hurt my face, So shut yourself in as you must, But I'll be here waiting as usual, Like an obedient doormat, When you finally feel, I'm good enough to pay attention to. Tonight, I'm facing reality, And tomorrow, I'll understand. Its a never ending process, That we all go through. Love me anyway. Dare you? |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Now, what if I was to double dog dare you to love me back? Would you? Love your intensity as always. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
phew! what a trip through your words/mood... I like it!!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Hell hath no fury...lol This flowed smoothly through your venting...great thought and emotions! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
all I can say is... WOW! -Tier |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Liked this...James |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Ouch. Excellent depth and insight. I really enjoy your poetry - have read several now and just loved them. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Masked One:  Hmmmmm....  I love ya already. You're too adorable to avoid!  I'm glad you liked this! Snow: It felt like a trip to me too. Thanks for enjoying! Butterflies: Thanks very much. I am glad it came through clearly and without stumbling. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Tiersdin: Thanks for the WOW. That says everything I need to hear. James: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Dreamkeeper: I don't know if I was feeling depth, but I'm glad you found it there. Makes me feel like it wasn't a poem in vain! LOL! I hope when you've read that I remembered to say thank you. If not, then THANK YOU! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ya know...I think you've read my mind somehow...words that I never could have pulled out so well...I truly enjoyed this mood-setting piece |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Temptress, Awesome, Gotta get me some of that strong emotion so I can write like you. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
But, how do you really feel?? This was great. . . thanks for getting it all out. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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