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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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North Carolina

0 posted 2000-11-16 10:44 PM


I'm quite inspired by the poetry,
It makes me want to soar like an eagle,
Reach the highest mountain,
Bypass any turmoil,
that I see,
Go directly to the fairy tales,
Of Sir Lancelot,
Poetry makes me laugh,
Poetry makes me weep,
And even though I can't sing,
I'll even hum a tune,
I'm quite inspired by the lyrics
of each poem as it is like a transcript
of music to my soul,
So many butterflies have flown deep within
The rainbow,
The sun does radiate the words and
gives them essence of true life,
Not fading but yet eternel,
sweeping through the wind,
Each day I come to sup on them
which quickly heals my open wound,
Poetry is the medicine to each and
every pore of my heart,
Just as in relationships,
I'm a lover of the way
A poet brings you in and lets
you share in a special way,
This my inspiration.


© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-11-16 11:00 PM


Yes the inspiration is wonderful!
And your poem is wonderful!

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-11-16 11:09 PM


Thanks Insect, I do love poetry , I can think of no better therapy, well I can, but this one is in the top ten list.
insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

3 posted 2000-11-16 11:55 PM


I'm curious about the other nine? Ha!
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
4 posted 2000-11-17 03:25 AM


A poet brings you in and lets
you share in a special way

Thank you for sharing, it does help!

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-11-17 03:41 AM




I'm a lover of the way
A poet brings you in and lets
you share in a special way,
This my inspiration.

Dear Rosebud you have inspired me with this one...well penned hon

Inspiration is the heart and soul of a poet
~HUG~
Tracie~
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Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




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Rosebud1229
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Posts 1813
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-11-17 01:56 PM


thanks insect, another of the ten most exciting things chocolate, but I try not to dive into that everyday, lol
inot2be, thank you I appreciate all the poetry, though the only downfall, is I can't read it all, but I find it often gives me inspiration when I have no words to write,
Tracie, thank you so much, this was such a beautiful flower, and at times we all need inspiration to open the heart, mind and soul which without one we are at a  loss, poetry spins an inner web into my soul, and I know it is a passion to us all, when they named this passions poetry, It was named the perfect name.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
7 posted 2000-11-18 06:40 PM


You are so right rosebud...Passions is the right name for this wonderful place  
I'm bumping you again sweetie
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2000-11-18 06:45 PM


Wow!! kiddo! that is so wonderful to read such heartfelt expressions...I love to read this kind of poem especially when its making the writer a little bit high..and the high is  contagious.........reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination......
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
9 posted 2000-11-18 07:24 PM


I think everyone here can really relate to your words.  Each post seems to be an inspiration for another. Well done.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
10 posted 2000-11-18 07:57 PM


Well said, Rosebud.  Whenever I read here at Passions, I am always inspired to write something.  I love the imagery in this one.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
11 posted 2000-11-19 01:19 AM


Rosebud,
This is absolutely beautiful. What imagination. Well done.

"I'm a lover of the way
A poet brings you in and lets
you share in a special way,"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
12 posted 2000-11-20 10:30 PM


thank you so much Tracie, I'm oft amazed at the poetry I read sometimes mear words can not describe how I'm feeling, sometimes I get so caught up in poetry, I appreciate the bump lol.
Ethome, I know what you mean about imagination, sometimes my mind goes into overtime, and it's like how can I possibly share these thoughts into a condensed writing
A Sandgrain, Each poem does that it's own unique form and style, I love poetry and prose
thanks Lone wolf, I do believe poetry does let your imagination run rapid, It's like watching tv but much better lol
Thank you so much Daniel, if I can share just a little spark of inspiration that makes another poem, it is well worth it, I enjoy each and every writer my problem is I can't keep up. Again it is I who applaud you

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