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Paradise Found
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Paradise Found |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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This poem is a collaboration with someone who wishes to remain nameless, so in respect I will not name, names, But I do want to give credit where it is due. The day begins with you and memories of the night before… a smile drifts across your lips as you sleep your scent fills me as your touch still grips me in remembered need. I strive for balance, within the sensations you awaken, but float lost tossed on a sea of desires storm flecked waves. rising up and cresting drowning thought… movement stills a sigh breath slowing casual knowing each tactile thought will hold the image languid fingers trailing over naked landscape, reveling in contact, floating in the warmth of flesh at ease relaxed serene fully alive fluttering lashes, with ease we fall to one another once again, no conscious thought, our bodies merely seek and find the perfect time where rhythm and endless motion meet without restraint as waves crashing against the shore bubbling gurgling sinking into each other as the sun rises blesses and consecrates paradise found. Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
How fortunate I feel when I come in and get to read yet another wonder created by your talent!!! Truly, you have perfectly described paradise  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, another wonder of your penmanship, and whoever collaborated with you complimented your style beautifully. This is truly paradise discribed, and so well written. Love this one as I always do. Take care Slushy Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely kethry..enjoyed your poem with your mysterious partner ha..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lynne-- I LOVED this! Simply beautiful! You and your mystery person make quite the team. Please pass along my WOW...WOW this was just simply amazing. Take care. ~amy~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The day begins with you and memories of the night before." Very nice..James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
can you tell now? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It was a friend who called himself the fool, I've not heard from him for a year. I don't even know if he's still writing. I miss him though he was one of the most sensitive poets I ever knew. i was priveleged to be able to write with him. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It was a friend who called himself the fool, I've not heard from him for a year. I don't even know if he's still writing. I miss him though he was one of the most sensitive poets I ever knew. i was priveleged to be able to write with him. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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